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  • Hummingbird;

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    OH MAAAAHHH GAAAWDDD
    THIS STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND AMAZING. I LOVE ITTTT
    it's too much for my little heart UGH. update update update!
    Thank you. ! xx
    July 21st, 2013 at 06:23pm
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    Haha! Loki and the couch are tied together by the red string of destiny. Despite both of the hot scenes being only dreams, it still had me grinning. If that can happen in the dream world, I can only imagine what it'll be like for them in reality... Well their reality. Lol. Great update once again.
    July 21st, 2013 at 06:08pm
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    I was really hoping that wasn't a dream. Damn! *groans in frustration*
    But Loki can't get a full night's sleep in a bed, can he? *giggles*
    And Chris a right twat! Like seriously bro?! *glares*
    July 21st, 2013 at 07:35am
  • Sailor Amethyst

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    Oh god only a dream? Jeez.
    Love this story. Very very good! Mr. Green
    July 21st, 2013 at 07:30am
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    @ Renavelia
    Why thank you!! As for the whole new york fiasco, it will come to play a part later. You have to think, SHEILD saw Thor take Loki away, so they dont even know he has returned. And when Aurora met him, he was a gory mess. His head was shaved after surgery so no more flowing black hair. I guess I should also mention that she lives in the Seattle/Portland area. Thanks so much for the review. It makes me happy to know you enjoy it so much!
    July 21st, 2013 at 12:33am
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    WOOT YOU UPDATED!!! I saw it and was like "YES!" Haha. When I read the part about the thunder, I thought Thor was going to make an appearance. I am glad that he didn't. She seems to not really know who Loki is which is weird given what happened in New York. But I like it. I like it a lot.
    July 21st, 2013 at 12:11am
  • Frost DeWinter

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    Excellent portrayal of the characters and wonderful use of language. I'm quite enjoying this yarn. Don't apologise for quality, and never rush. It's worth the wait.
    July 20th, 2013 at 12:57am
  • SpencerG

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    I can seriously dig this chapter! I feel things brewing! *giggles*
    July 19th, 2013 at 05:46am
  • SpencerG

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    Chris is an animal!!!! Jaysus!!!!!!
    July 14th, 2013 at 07:38am
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    Ouch! I know that must hurt! I've recently cut my finger in the kitchen, but thankfully it was just glued and not stitched. I am a baby when it comes to my own blood too. Cool But no worries, Dr. Loki is in the house.
    July 11th, 2013 at 08:58pm
  • SpencerG

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    Oh my glob! That is too precious. And I jizzed at the imagine of Loki fresh and clean. I just can't- *faints*
    July 5th, 2013 at 02:05am
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    Haha! Loki is so bad! I laughed so hard when I read the part about him hitting his physical therapist. That is so like him when someone hurts him. Even if it was unintentional. I like how she scolded him. Victory

    Rofl!

    He broke the guys glasses! Facepalm
    July 4th, 2013 at 06:16pm
  • SufferingSweetSorrow

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    that ending! "not today" mwuahaha!!!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 03:31am
  • SpencerG

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    This is absolutely amazing! I love this!! Please update soon! PLEASE!!!!
    July 3rd, 2013 at 02:20am
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    "You're not crazy, are you?" "Not today." Hail

    Lmao! That was so funny to me. Oh and the fourth chapter, the "Filler", was awesome. I don't even care if it was a filler chapter. It was brilliant. I love how you are developing Loki's character. Also Aurora's. She seems like she is able to tolerate Loki's attitude and that's a plus.

    Chris better watch himself, especially around Loki. If that god ever gets his powers back and Chris is on his little black list...then oh well. Can't say that I feel sorry for the poor sap. Ha Ha
    July 1st, 2013 at 04:57pm
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    @ LilLamb
    Haha nailed it!
    July 1st, 2013 at 03:50pm
  • Vampyris

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    She's taking him home, I saw that one coming I must admit. However, it's exactly what I wanted lol
    July 1st, 2013 at 02:17pm
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    But as a nurse, she is used to people with mental issues, and therefore it doesn't bother her :3
    June 30th, 2013 at 08:28pm
  • SufferingSweetSorrow

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    c: oh that last chapter! she thinks he's a nut!
    June 30th, 2013 at 06:21pm
  • Vampyris

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    Hmm chapter fillers are gooodddddd lots of dialogue between characters. Love love !
    June 30th, 2013 at 03:53pm