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  • tealmontreal

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    Goodness what a cliffhanger!
    April 15th, 2014 at 08:26pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Hahaha! What a way to wake up!
    April 15th, 2014 at 06:23pm
  • Doctor.Vengeance

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    I'm so excite for aurora and loki to be united! And for the baby!!! Xx
    April 15th, 2014 at 05:47am
  • TheTalkingKay

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    I discovered this yesterday, and am in love! Please keep more coming! Very Happy
    April 9th, 2014 at 07:05am
  • broken_city_sky

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    Oh god. Or, I guess I should say, oh gods. I'm so excited for what's coming but Hel's threat at the end makes me nervous...
    April 9th, 2014 at 06:09am
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    @ SuperWhoVengeLock
    Maybe...maybe not. I haven't decided yet...
    April 7th, 2014 at 10:50pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Oh, shit. Now, that is going to bite him in the ass later.
    April 7th, 2014 at 08:04pm
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    @ punkrockandhockey
    Lol it's ok. Let me know if Ieffed it up. Still writing this on my phone, so mistakes are bound to happen
    April 7th, 2014 at 04:15pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    @ SerenitySpeaker
    You know I think after re reading the end of the chapter I've sorted it out. I obviously got real engrossed in the story that I missed some bits.
    April 7th, 2014 at 04:07pm
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    @ punkrockandhockey
    what doubts do you have? maybe I can help you with them.
    April 7th, 2014 at 01:30pm
  • Jenilulu

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    Oh no...is..sigh, I need more. This is all getting too good.
    April 7th, 2014 at 11:14am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    I have doubts about Loki after that but sometimes things have a way of working out. You are doing a real good job with this story though :)

    Next chapter will be interesting!
    April 7th, 2014 at 08:53am
  • Red The Small

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    Eeeeeeeeeeek! <3
    April 7th, 2014 at 08:06am
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    I dont know...he did slam the door pretty hard...and locked it. Lick
    April 7th, 2014 at 05:00am
  • powerofkisses

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    EEEEEEEEEE Something bad is gonna happen with Hel :/
    April 7th, 2014 at 04:57am
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    You did a great job writing what Loki has done previously and getting him to see it from other perspectives. I just hope he gets out of there ok though.

    Excited to see how this plays out!
    March 31st, 2014 at 07:37am
  • broken_city_sky

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    Wow, I have to say that I really loved this chapter. You really effectively captured the tension and emotion in his past victims. Well done!
    March 29th, 2014 at 09:10pm
  • SerenitySpeaker

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    @ SuperWhoVengeLock
    If only.
    March 29th, 2014 at 04:45am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Well, I wish we had that concoction in real life.
    March 29th, 2014 at 04:30am
  • WriteMeALoveLetter

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    he really is a changed man. lucky Aurora. but there has to e a way for them to be inmortal together without giving up the baby :(
    March 22nd, 2014 at 03:59pm
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