To Roam Into the Unknown - Comments

Oh my goodness...this chapter was amazing...I'm sad that Loki just did what he did at the end, the more this continues the more he shows he has changed. Sigh...I love this.

I liked that you had more of Aurora in this chapter, it's good to hear how she's feeling and what's going on with her.
It doesn't seem like anything good will come at the end of this chapter and you've definitely left us hanging that's for sure!

@ powerofkisses
I'm doing it to myself too. I'm free writing this, none of it is planned out, I just write what comes to me...and am clutching onto my own cliffhanger, lol. I keep wondering what's going to happen next.

WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS TO ME?!?!?! lol

Awe, he's going to get into more trouble.

aww she's alive, I die slowly picturing Loki as a father :3 thanks for updating! Such an intense story, so mucha happens in each chapter. Write more soon :)

Loki deserves everything he's getting, even though we know he has a better side to him none of the other people that he's betrayed could trust him...it makes sense why every one wants proof.
Any how loved this!

I am happy you wrote about Aurora in this chapter and so glad she's alive :)

Of course it's never easy for Loki but just once it would be good for him to have some good luck for once. I'm hoping there's a way out but it doesn't look likely.

SHE LIVES!

Shaking in anticipation. Ack! So good!

The end is in sight?? No!!! I don't want this story to end! But anyways, enough of my personal feelings. I actually think it's totally justified that nothing is coming easy for Loki. No matter what he's like now, he's done a lot in his life that isn't exactly respectable.

@ Jenilulu
Wow, thank you! I'm glad you like it!

I love this! I don't usually read a lot of these types of stories but I am highly hooked!

@ BlackRoseDying1334
Holy sheet, thanks! So glad you like it, more to come soon!

This is one of the best fan fictions I've ever read. Very well done!

thanks for updating quickly, the journey is killing mee lol
Hoping they can get back soon with the apples, and save Aurora. or could Loki become a mortal (? you're killing meee, write more soon, love this! :D

@ punkrockandhockey

@ MMM26
Keep in mind, Loki still has much to atone for

Harborview...Seattle...my this is all so familiar to me, too! Love it, only on the earliest chapters but my goodness, I love it!! I'm looking forward to continuing!

I only just caught up with this story so read the previous chapter and the latest one. Now that Loki and Thor are separated I have a feeling this won't be good. It just seems there's no good news for them at all. Maybe they'll catch a break in the next chapter.

I just love reading this story :)

Jeez they can't catch a break!