If I Look Back - Comments

Wonderful story! I cannot wait to read more!

I had a rough time figuring out in whose point of view I was reading. But I figured it out at the end. :)

Awe! I want Ben to meet her family!

We'll, her family sounds like a ball of fun. :D
Awe, she's missing Benedict. ;D

@ mae721
I think that would help, or at least a quick overview of how they'd gotten closer over the months, or things they started doing together. The way it is is good, but the sense of time kind of gets lost and you kinda have to infer or even just guess how long they've known each other.

Well, that was perfectly fluffy. :D :D

@ keversonian
I meant to reply but wrote a comment instead. My bad! Thanks for your feedback and let me know what you think of my comment :)

Would it make more sense if I included more of a date timeline? I have it in my mind that they met in January/February and didn't start sleeping together until July. I don't want to write Lilly's everyday for months because her everyday is probably just working, running and maybe talking to him on the phone while he's working. I'm trying to hit highlights. Let me know! I am more than happy to include more detail to show time passing.

I love the setup and the characters for this story, but it seems as if while you're trying to have it move along really naturally and not give obsessive amounts of detail, you're losing a lot of the storyline detail. Lilly just seemed to jump from "having relationship issues/being on the rebound' to "sleeping with Ben" without much detail into their daily relationship. I love it, it just seems to move at warp speed.

another incredible chapter :) you really are a talented writer xxx

Good god they're adorable :3 I love er tattoos and im lovin the way Ben reacted to them. I can't wait for more!

Love this ;) xx

It's so good they weren't in Oslo! Poor Ben and Tom had to be worried sick :x sheesh I love this story! Update soon?

Holy crap. Poor Ben. Worrying for his love. <3

Aweeee :3 this is adorable. I love Lilly and Ben and I'm trying not to google her tatto because I want it to be a surprise so please update soon!

I googled 'lagom'... Hehehe... :D can't wait for the next update!

Awe! That's cute. I like reading in Ben's POV.

aww, Benedict wants kids :) update soon, please!

I feel like that 'no-kid' thing going to be a kick in the pants later.

please update xx this is perfect omg