San Diego Warriors Part II: Nate and Lo - Comments

Just finished this one again!! I love more each time!! I'm ready for some Pete and Holly!!

@ kati89
Yayyyy I'm so excited!

@ Aaugustin
Thanks for the comment! I'm actually doing final edits right now on Part 3. Hope to start posting it this week sometime. I'll let you know. Thanks for reading!

Please continue I love ur stories so muchhhhhh

Please continue the series!!

For the love of all things good, please continue this series with Pete and Holly!!! I love your story development. Simply exquisite:)

Aw that was such a lovely ending! Ring on her finger and everything :) !! Can't wait for the next story. . . . . Can't wait to see where you go with it!! :)

I absolutely loved it! Great ending! I am someone who likes lots of closer and a long epilogue, but I get why you left it up. I really hope you start the next story real soon! And maybe show more of them being a real couple. Great story, and loved every bit of it! :)

Simply incredible.....And I cannot wait for Pete/Holly story line...I'm thinking Nate's not going to take it that well. . . . . !! Can't wait to read the ending, but it'll be bittersweet, as I'll miss their storyline!!! :) x

Love love loved these update. I just love them together

Soooo I unconditionally love this story, maybe just a little more than the first one. That's mostly just because that little twist of how they first wound up being together, but not together and all the secrets and how they all came to light. But yeah.

and,

PART THREE; OH WORD?!

I adore this story, I think I prefer it to Katie & John, which I didn't think possible! - Mainly because I prefer Lo as a character! - You should so continue this series....maybe Pete next, maybe with one of Nate's sisters or something?! - 'Coz you just KNOW that would drive him crazy . . . .!
Either way, this is amazing, I love your writing style, so please continue!! :)

I am back from vacation and read the updates! Loved the new chapters and it makes me sad that this story is already ending! If you do another story I think you should do one on Pete and have some of Lo and Nate in there too like Katie and John are in this one. Cant wait for the next update! :)

Soooo happy Nate isn't pretending anymore! I hope Lo figures out that she loves him too real soon. Great update! Can't wait to see where they go from here

OH GOD, if a guy ever gave me a key like that, I think I'd just die...but a good kind of die. That's just genius.

I absolutely love this story!!! Just read it all today!!!! And I can't get enough!!!!

Loved! And I'm dying to see what happens when they finally have that talk!! Can't wait for more

I was so happy when I found out you were starting a new story, and reading I'm absolutely elated. Your writing is simply wonderful and I am on my toes waiting for the next chapter! There character development here has been fantastic to read.

Love love love! I absolutely loved the last chapter. Especially how Nate was soooooo caring towards lo. I just hope they tell each other how they really feel really soon! Can't wait for the next update! The updates literally make my day :)

Love it. Love it. Love it.
I love that Lo is so unwilling to put up with any of Nate's bullshit. I love that Nate isn't as driven by sex so much anymore. Gahhhh. Gaaaasasashaha