Miss Cartwright - Comments

Oh it ended :C I really enjoyed the story. I like Nathan/isabelle relationship but i think Nathan/carrie would work better. I like the easy go flow of your writing. It's easy to read. Normally i do not like sex stories and the summery gave me that impression. But i'm glad it was all about it. I Was trying to work out when this story to place. I was thinking around 1920-1940ish? I've subscribed and hope you will update soon.

I miss this story!!!

This was an amazing story. Your style of writing had me hooked in from the very beginning. I definitely think this should be published. I honestly think that this is just an amazing story, and deserves every good comment in so very well earns. Well done!

I really like this story so far. It's not your average smut story, which is great. I like that you took the time to develop the characters a bit before they jumped into bed together. The only thing I had a question about is what era this story is taking place. Other than that, great job; I subscribed.

Okay, so I just absolutely loved the way you started this story off. You skipped all that typical boring I just woke up and hit my alarm clock and now I'm getting ready for school and went straight into Nathan going into Isabelle's room. It really hooked me in more than it would have if you had just started with info about the characters or something. I thought it was so sweet how Nathan acted towards Isabelle and how he was helping her make the bath perfect for her, even though she was being very picky about it. Overall, I think this story is off to a great start! Great job

@ pillowsnfeathers17
Awesome! When I first started reading, I immediately though civil war era south, like Georgia. Then I kept reading and I noticed things that wouldn't have been around then. I was just wondering if it was supposed to be in a specific time frame or if it was anyplace, anytime.

@ Themonstercanhearus
That's a good question...I guess I never really thought about a specific time period, but the pictures in my head are probably closest to the 1940's...part of my inspiration was from The Notebook which also takes place in the 1940's :)

I love the story. One question... Is there a specific time period this story takes place in?

Beautifully written. Good use of vocabulary and sentence structure, however, I would suggest making the chapters a little longer. I enjoyed reading, but personally like to be able to read at least 2,500 words per chapter, if not more.

I love this story frikin much!!!

@ your_one_addiction
I totally agree, Isabelle is screwing around with him (ahem...excuse the pun) and she doesn't even know what she really wants. Hopefully she figures it out soon...thanks for reading!!

(P.s. I've just discovered this reply to comment thingy. It's pretty nifty :)

ahhh so I kind of hate Isabelle and it's not because she's a bad person but I feel like she's toying with Nathan and that makes me so mad. He's in love with her and I just feel like she's playing with his emotions, the way she says she's not even sure if she'll like her new husband. like... if you really loved nathan you would just turn him away, you wouldn't smile or laugh at him you would be indifferent. ahhhhh please update soon i need to know what happens!

this story was very interesting,and i can tell you are a very good writer.But you might want to work on making the first chapter a little more interesting,that way its easier to get into the story.i was very surprised i actually liked this story,because im usually not interested in these types of stories.

i only read the first chapter - though i typically don't enjoy things that seem so sexual from the get go, which i could totally be mistaken about, it was well written and at least she just didn't jump on him from the get go which has totally happened in stories before. you are a spectacular writer and should continue the story, wish you the best luck on the story.

Oh my god write more write more!!! I love this so much, I love a good romance and this is just wonderful. The new husband and Nathan just being so distant and ... gahh! Please update soon I need to know more about what's going to happen. I love the layout and the way you describe the characters and I just love all the images in my mind after reading this (As in the setting not ... you know that ;) ) please please update soon. I'm totally subscribing!

I'm glad comment swap brought me here.

Hello! I was sent to your story by comment swap!

This story is amazing, simple as that. I was hooked from the beginning. I love the romance between Nathan and Isabella, it's both deep and humorous! I had to stop myself from cracking up after reading the innuendos in chapter 6.

Well done! Keep the chapters coming!

So, after the wonderful comment you left me I had no choice but to come and return the favor!

First and foremost, when you have the talent to write like THIS, how does my story seem appealing at ALL?!

I adore your layout and you concept is so unique and intriguing I couldn't possibly stop reading. Recommended and subscribed without a doubt! You have visualization that is absolutely surreal and you write the uncensored, honest, truth about life and as a reader I really do appreciate that! Your characterization is flawless and every detail sends chills up my spine, because again, it's just simply relatable. I love in the first chapter Nathan is feeling so contradicted, because he wants to get close but he knows he can't. I'm so glad I read this, and am looking forward for more!

Haha, I can't tell you I'll read the sex scenes because I'm a little goody two shoes, but ah, whatever, I love your story regardless :)

God Bless!!

Olivia

First I want to say that the concept of this is crazyyy. I can't imagine having a guy wait on me hand & foot for 3 years. He runs her baths for her & puts the bubbles in!! I REALLY like how you didn't jump into them having sex as soon as the parents left. That shit gets on my nerves :/ and it was interesting that the guy was hesitant to get physical when it's usually the other way around. After years of doing everything for her... oh the tension that must have built up. I think you've written this really well so far! And it sounds like things will get interesting when the parents get home..

When you look at the layout, it looks likes a old, western, princess theme. I like it. And you put a good amount of detail into the paragraphs/sentences, so its not to hard to understand. But its not a bunch of info, so like that reader can't have an imagination. Ya know? ..< Basically in all Im saying ,its really goooood! XD

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I don't know why but I didn't find myself connecting to this story. I'm sorry. I loved your layout and I think it really helps with the spirit of the story. You have a very distinctive writing style that's beautiful. I can't think of anything else to really say except regret I didn't really connect. Sorry. Good luck!