Miss Cartwright - Comments

This is a wonderful story so far, and you write very well. It's as if I'm reading an already published book. I also enjoy the love connection that you set up for them, it's not one that's often used. The entire time I was reading this story I could picture the events going on, and the way people looked, so it has great imagery. Also by stating the summary the way you did, you immediately have people hooked from the factor of suspense. You have me wanting to read more.I can't find anything wrong with it, the only thing is maybe add a little of their P.O.V., it would make the emotions they feel seem more intense. But you're an amazing writer and I hope to read the next chapter soon :)

Though I am not a fan of these types stories, these three chapters show a substantial amount of great writing. What I loved most was how much detail you put into Nathan's thoughts and descriptions about Isabelle. You used great imagery, which can hard to describe at times when trying to use the perfect adjectives. I see great potential in this book, and you may have me hooked. Keep up the great work.

Oh my goodness. I adore this story. I'm so glad that Comment Swap brought me here. I like how you didn't seem to rush much. Like the two's relationship. (If there is going to be one xD) While it's only 3 chapters in, I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story. It's so intriguing. xD I even have little voices in my head for each character for when I read their dialogue. That doesn't always happen with stories for me. So yay! If anything, you could maybe make the chapters a little longer? That is really the only criticism that I have for you! You've got another subscriber! =]

I really like the whole idea of your story! Can't wait for more and hope you update quickly haha. (:

I'm really intrigued by your story so far! I really hope you write more chapters, because I can definitely see myself getting sucked in. :D