Hopelessly Falling - Comments

This is so great congrats on winning that award that's p cool also I hope you feel better soon

First up: Migranes suck and I'm sorry you're sick and I hope you feel better soon. :)

Second: THIS IS GORGEOUS. I love it (and Patrick's hats heyyyy) and the characterization is wonderful and the guys are wonderful and this, just this, okay, I love it and it's adorable and wonderful and yes. <3<3

I'll be honest.. I don't really like it that much. Don't get me wrong, it's a written very well, but Pete is older than all the guys and I don't believe they met in high school. I know it's a fan fiction and anything can happen, but I think it would have made sense if you had kept some things factual. Other than that though it was pretty good! You're a great writer.

Oh thank god it's the fedora stage, not the I ❤ Bingo stage

Oh lawd, please don't mention his hats. You're gonna make him buy tons of them

You still have two weeks left??? Oh wow, I got out of school early June

I don't understand how Patrick is so ignorant about all of these things, simply because of how his friends are, but I adore it so it doesn't matter. I just hope Pete doesn't unintentionally take advantage of Patrick's ignorance. Although a bit of drama and chaos can be fun.

Aww ^-^ haha and it means that they recommend the story :)

I just read all of what is posted so far, and you had me hooked before I was even halfway through the first chapter.

This is such a beautiful thing.

Awwww he doesn't know what spooning is ❤❤

This is so great wow good plot and beautiful transitions also you update so quickly you go

This is really good! I think the character's personalities are perfect! And they make sense!! Its done in a way that makes it relateable. I cant wait to keep reading

Ooo, really loving this story so far!! Can't wait for your next update :3 <3

Liking this so far :), its pretty interesting will be good to see where this goes :)

Liking this so far :), its pretty interesting will be good to see where this goes :)