City Lights - Comments

i kind of feel bad for Ricky. :(
but i'm happy for them, too. this is giving me mixed emotions!
haha, i love it. update soon! <3

I honestly don't even know how I found this story, but I am sure as hell glad I did! Can I just say that the twins in the summary are too cute! Plus I like the whole layout. Devlyn's dad is just, ugh I don't even know, he's just a prick. But other than that, I love this story. I really admire you for writing around this topic. You write with such emotion that it makes the reader actually feel sad, but in the best possible way. I think you're doing really well with this story, an absolutely fantastic job dear.

those chapters were so cute!!
i'm so glad they are finally getting married! yay!
update soon! <3

AWWWWWW devins finally gonna propose <3 I'm so happy for then ^.^ and it's awesome Ricky's stepping up. Great chapters c:

oh my god.. i started crying when Ricky was talking about that.. hard.
it's so sad, and i didn't know Ricky liked Devlyn! omfg, update soon!

@ sandpit.turtle
I hate when everyone calls Pome kris I prefer Jadea.

@ Fade away i am Jade
im pretty sure... she makes us call her Chris and she denies that her name is Kristy

@ sandpit.turtle
Does she hate her name too?

@ Fade away i am Jade
my cousin's name is spelled kristY that is why i spelled it that way :)

great job though as always!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

great job though as always!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

ok... i just realize you used the name Kristy but... you spelled it wrong.. it's kristI not "Y" ...

I would know my name is Kristi... -.- i hates it though cuz people ALWAYS spell it wrong

aw, Ricky and Chris are just adorable! :')
and first words! ahhh! so freaking cute. i thought it was funny when Beliel hit Chris on the shoulder and he was like "oh you little shit." haha, great chapters. update sooon! c:

i'm really sorry. i want to help you in some way, but i know i can't. i wish i could. you can get through this, i promise you. you do whatever you want, if it helps you. that's all that matters. i'm in love with the story, no matter how you write it. stay strong.

I agree absolutley with @flood

If you need someone to talk to ... message me.

I'm sososo sorry for your loss. My mom went through it too when I was born and I'm lucky she's alive for a few of the things she did. But I completely understand your ways of writing I write the way I'm feeling too
Be there for her daughter and when she's older speak of all the good things and help her remember!

Don't be sorry about writing the way you do, if it helps YOU then that's all that matters! I'd rather read a sad story then find out someone *god forbid* committed suicide for not having a way to release all the built up feelings

I am extremely sorry for your lose, I know what it's like to lose someone to suicide. So I am sorry

Nice! I would kill to see Devin punch someone! I can just imagine!!! even though this is more a Devin/Develyn story how about you put some of the guys in... They're probably worried too!! ;) GREAT JOB!!! :) :) :)

@ sandpit.turtle
YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!

i wish she would be happy. :/
i know it's hard for her, buut ugghhhh. i'd like to see a double date with Ange and Kira! hah, update soon!