City Lights - Comments

I really do love these stories but it seems devlyn just keeps getting more upset and eats less. I'd love to read a happy chapter. I know that might not happen for awhile but when it does I'd enjoy to see the old dev. :3

I love it already! I almost started crying in the beginning when she commited suicide, but then i read that it was a dream and i felt so silly. I'm happy that Kira and Ange are okay again. I think Devlyn's dad need to fall in a hole and die. He is suck a prick. Telling her he is gonna send her to an institution is not the right way to make her depression go away! Gah, that was one time I wish I would have been able to teleport into the story and beat the fuck out of him! Anywhore, I love it. Update when you are able too. XD

amazing chapter! i loved it a lot.
can't wait for you to update again. c:

@ Fade away i am Jade
@ Flood

thank you guys so much :D
you are both awesome and the next update should be up tomorrow or the next day.

I think that Devin should do something to snap her outta it... Mabey run her a nubble bath and the two have a talk of sorts.

There would be something that happens and it makes Devlyn and devin have a reality check, what that something would be i don't know and you should have that kids(I can't think of his name) dad come back or something to that effect c: OR you could bring devlyns and michaels dad back in and make him do something

at least Ange and Kira are okay now. i was super worried for a minute. i hope Devlyn gets better soon. and i hope you update soon!

At first I didn't know it was a dream and I got mad like WHY WOUKD YOU DO THIS OMG YOU CAN'T DO THAT TO HIM. And the it said end of dream.... Safe to say I felt really stupid! But this story is turning out great so far :D

aw no! :c
this is so sad but so good. i can't wait until next chapter. i want to see Angelo's reaction!
please please please update soon!

i love this and i can't wait for this story to actually start up and get going!
i swear i cried hard on the beginning of the first chapter. hahah.
update soon!

Aw she bit his neck haha

Best first chapter ever¡!!!!!!¡! This is amazing and I can't wait for more

Keep writing. It sounds good so far! I wish Devlyn would eat more. Reading the first part of the chapter was heart breaking! It scared me man. o: I can't wait to see the rest.

Yeah, you should definitely keep going with this. I like it already, I hope Devlyn can get better for herself, Devin, and the babies.
Update soon (: