The Tree - Comments

Omg I loved this story, it's so perfect and... You made me cry like a babyi n the last chapters!

Oh my god what an amazing short story, the last chapters literally made me cry my heart out! Beautifully written :)

That was such a beautiful ending to a brilliant story, I'm so glad she got to see Brian one last time, that they got to say goodbye properly. So sweet that he still watches over her. *wipes away a tear*

This was an amazing story. Brought out a lot of emotions out of me.

this is quite a story :) and you made me cry at the end awn

You're stories always make me cry. I am seriously bawling my eyes out right now!!!! It was a beautiful ending just, so sad!!

Oh that was so sad....

Oh my goodness!!! Just wow!!! At least she hasn't gotten rid of him yet :) and aww she married Zacky!!! Looking forward to more :)

That's a really good plot twist!! I wasn't expecting that at all! I've just caught up with this and I actually thought her and Brian would end up falling in love romantically, their friendship was so sweet, growing up together and being there for one another. The fact that he wasn't real, just a figment of her imagination doesn't take away that fact either.

I'm still so shocked that he isn't real! Haha I can't wait to read the last chapter :)

He isn't real?!?! That was a big plot twist.

That was a great plot twist hun. Keep it up!

I can't believe her parents didn't go to her graduation! That's so fucked up.

Looking forward to more :) hopefully their friendship can stand the distance!!! I can't believe her parents don't care enough to come to her graduation :(

Loved the update

haha a male model!!!! I love it :D and Shay is friends with Zack now...very interesting. I feel so bad that Brian's dad is horrible to him. And Shay's parents aren't much better!! Looking forward to more :)

@ mindblind
Don't worry about it. It was hard to explain so it didn't come out right when I tried to explain :)

@ fiction246
@ shortygirl

I'm so sorry about all that! I'm an idiot and rambled about something totally different instead of going back and reading it over. I have completely fixed the chapter.

@ mindblind
no not that the actual plot jumps around we mean that the text gets repeated. like the beginning of the chapter shows up again half way through and the same happens at the end. if you read it you will understand. I love the story its just something weird happened when you uploaded it...

I mean that parts of story cut off and then start again.

@ shortygirl
@ fiction246

I kind of decided to make it jump around for the fact that I didn't want to make this a full out story. I probably should have done a much better job at transitions, but I was too lazy for it. Pretty much I'm jumping around to what would be considered 'key points' in their relationship. I tried to make sure to include all the extra information covered between the jumps that are important to the story.

So really I'm just kind of sorry if it's annoying or confusing, but I hope it's still enjoyable...?