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  • shortygirl

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    Loved the update but it jumps around.
    September 10th, 2013 at 05:54am
  • fiction246

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    It was a really good chapter but at parts it cuts off and starts again or from another part. Like it jumps around a bit. Other then that it was good!! I feel bad for both of them cause they have no friends at school but their relationship is really sweet!!!
    September 10th, 2013 at 03:26am
  • heretic.

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    My heart cannot take the cuteness!! There's something so sweet and innocent about this, just simple, yet brilliant. I don't think I've ever read a story where they were kids before, I really like it though.

    I love the idea of The Tree, I wish I would have had something like that when I was growing up. Poor Shay, it seems Brian is the only person who has time for her, I hope they will continue to be friends :D

    More soon!
    September 2nd, 2013 at 04:49pm
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    "You can put my head on a stick if you want" "deal" haha I loved that bit!! Looking forward to more :) poor Shay...hopefully Brian will be a good friend!!
    September 1st, 2013 at 11:32am
  • shortygirl

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    Aww.... That was cute. Loving this so far.
    September 1st, 2013 at 06:54am
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