I enjoyed your story. I liked that neither of your characters you use to tell the story are actually in the band. I like that the two points of view are from two different girls, though really I guess that could also be confusing since it's really telling two different stories, haha, but I'm guessing they'll probably merge at some point. I found that some things were a bit abrupt... I'm not quite sure how to describe it. Just the feeling of being rushed, I guess, as I read it. Overall though, I really liked the story line and was intrigued by Austin's mysterious scar and sad eyes haha :)
November 24th, 2013 at 04:58am