Haha sorry I will try my hardest to fix that I'm not the best at that stuff but I shall fix it thank you for the feed back but I am happy you liked it this was my first story on here so I was nervous ^^
i enjoyed this chapter, but erhm.. there's a lot of capitalization and punctuation errors. the punctuation errors make it hard to read because everything seems like one long line of words. not trying to be rude in the slightest, i just thought i should let you know. c: i'm looking forward to an update, soon!
Awe its cute XD but poor devs has to move...plus new bullys yikes lol And if youll concider it id love to be your cowriter...if youd like just tell me so and I shall do my best plus id love to write in balz pov X3 thanks in advance