And Then There Was You - Comments

Loved it, and I'm getting sad that it's almost over. I don't want to see it end!!! Can't wait for the next one!

xoxo J

Pre-wedding festivities are my favourite! Loved it as per usual! I'm definitely campaigning for a sequel!

Oh my gosh!!!! I can't believe this is almost over!!! I'm so glad you wrote more than 10 chapters of this :) can't wait for the wedding chapter!!! It's so exciting!!! It's so cute how much they miss eachother!!! It will be sad to see this end!! <3

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!

That ending though...PHEWWWYYY!

I had to laugh at Matt whining about getting rid of his old couch, what is it with men and their freakin sofas? Mine was the same XD

I too agree, pictures make a home, you can have the fanciest furniture, all new, high tech appliances but without pictures and memories, it would just be a house like any other.

I'm very much looking forward to the hen and stag do's, I'm sure Brian and Gena have a few tricks up their sleeves ;)

I loved that they couldn't keep their hands off each other at the party, the build up was amazing.

And again, that ending. Steamy as hell!! Hahaha.

Can't believe we're nearly at the end! I'm going to miss this story, just like all of the others but I'm SO excited for the wedding!!

oh my god, I loved this chapter. It was friggin awesome. I love this story, and I'm going to be sad to see it end. I can't wait for the next chapter though! I'm excited for it! More soon, please?

Oh dear… Men and their couches! Matt really does have a one track mind!

I agree! Pictures make a house a home… it’s not furniture or curtains. Memories… Pictures capture memories… :)

Oooh Ooohh!!!! They are throwing them an engagement party, right? How cool and considerate are they!

Mac appears to be a lot more mature when it comes to sex these days. Matt acts like a horny teenager, ready to jump her bones at any moment and Mac has really nailed the art of discretion  Well done Mac, well done!

I FREAKING KNEW IT!

An engagement gift for Mac could be a box of instant cold packs to render Matt useless :P Horny bastard! Haha

I’m glad that you put real thought into wedding preparations. Time after time, I read stories where organising everything went perfectly and it was the most magical time ever… blah blah blah… and so, it’s nice to see that she’s faced dramas like most bride’s to be! :)

Papa Gates getting all emotional is a sight to behold, I’m sure.

Oh, I cannot wait for the Hen’s party! I hope Gena hasn’t listened to her and has gone all out! It’s the one night you can have, Mac! You don’t have to touch… but there’s no shame in looking :P

And the Bachelor Party… are they really having their parties the night before the wedding? Oh dear… Hangovers galore on the Big Day :P

Aww :( Not long to go now!

I'm so sad that this is ending. Mac and Matt are definitely one of my favorite fan-fic couples that I've ever had the pleasure to read. =) I just love this so much. <3

Oh my gosh only two more and an epilogue to go!!!!! I hope you have another story in the works because I can't do without your writing for too long!!! Great chapter :) loved the engagement party and I absolutely love how much they love each other!!! They are just so sweet :) I can't wait to see how this ends :) I have loved the journey of this story, seeing their love grow and just be so wonderful :) <3 (ps never stop writing)

I can't deal with the fact there's not much left! I'm going to miss their relationship! I'm beyond gutted that its finishing!

Woot, I get extra points! *dances* hehe

Oh mac, I know you're broody but at least wait until school is finished and done with before thinking about babies, she can barely juggle Matt and school let alone a baby too, although Matt is just an oversized baby himself, especially when he gets sick hahaha

I like the wedding planning in this chapter, the relationship that has blossomed between her and Gena is so sweet and I'm so glad you portray Gena this way, so many people portray her and all the Wives and girlfriend really, as bitches when they don't know them at all. I like Gena in this :)

Yes, I agree with Mac, the whole trying on of the dresses thing should be done with her mum present, it's hopefully a once in a life time thing so mother has to be there! And I agree that that first dress was so not Mac, she would look much better in something simple and understated, not a toilet roll holder haha.

Matt makes a good point, will Mac be able to handle the fans, the crazy ones anyway, when they start hounding her and demanding information, will she be ready for all that? I hope so.

Gena to the rescue again, girls please, you don't need to know everything about their sex life, even though I would probably be a nosy bitch too haha. I'm so looking forward to the wedding, I'm getting my bumper pack of tissues and ice cream ready cause I know I'm going to cry buckets haha

Can't wait for the next update!

I love it ! McKenna really needs to wait until she finishes school to get pregnant or its going to be so hard for her. How far is she? not sure if I remember it being mentioned

I love the relationship that McKenna has with gena. They're like sisters really. I can't wait for the dress shopping with her mom. Will you put up pics of all the dresses, suits, shoes and jewellery? I love all that stuff lol .

Please update as soon as you can xx

Absolutely loved it! It was so cute and I can't wait to see more. I will say, Gena is a good friend for what she did at the end of the chapter. And of course I can not wait to see how you write the wedding and everything else.

More soon pretty please?
This is like an addiction and I need my fix.

xoxo J

I am really excited that the story is being updated but that means it's going to end. I don't like that part....

I suggest tiny weddings and amazing honeymoons...it will last 6ish horribly stressful hours cost thousands and if it's the right guy then he's the only detail you will really notice until you are looking at the pictures

Aww I really like the name violet!!!! It's sounds so sweet :) and I can't wait for them to get married!! It's so exciting :) I'm really glad she has such a good friend in Gena. And Lacey at the end talking about Johnny..that cracked me up!!! Looking forward to more of this :) it's going to be sad when it ends <3

Work's been kicking my ass so I'll just do one huge comment as I catch up with everything haha.

Chapter 16
It's so sweet that Matt has taken the time to create some space for McKenna to study, to me, that just screams of maturity and his love for her, he doesn't want her to worry or fret about not getting enough studying done so he helps her out, the sweetheart. Even forgoing a roll around in his make shift fort huh? Wow, where can I get me one of these? XD

I love their banter, how easy their conversations are. There's no awkwardness or forced conversations its just, really nice :)

Oh no, why can't Brian take his head out of his ass and see how much he's hurting his sister, she's his own flesh and blood and he'd rather behave like a child than do the right thing and make it up to them. Even if he has to bite his tongue while around Matt, he should just try for Mckenna.

Okay, so, I can see where they're all coming from, Michelle was just trying to help, offer some advice. Mckenna finds it awkward to talk about Val like that and Matt doesn't want Mac to be hurt or worry about things. But they could have been a little easier on Michelle, she was after all, just trying to help.

“I can just see it now. You’ll show up, there will be candles…” hahahaha.

It's so beautiful that Matt has fallen so deeply in love with her, it warms my heart

“The china!” Zacky almost shrieked, pushing them away from the china cabinet. Matt and Brian are squaring off against each other and all Zacky can think of is his precious china hahaha.

BRIAN!!!!! You complete ass hole!!! God, I hate him so much right now! You just keep on with your pig headedness, you've completely broken your sister! I really hope she makes him feel so fucking guilty for this! Gah!

Chapter 17
I'm so sad for Matt, sad that they let Brian win so easily. I know it was hard and Brian was being an ass and making things so difficult for them but why didn't she fight that little bit harder for him? If she loves him as much as she says she does, she would have fought. But I can understand from her side too, she was tired of all the animosity and hurt. Brian Haner, you have a lot to answer for buddy!

There are mini waterfalls appearing on my face just imagining how heartbroken they both are. I'm glad she gave Brian a piece of her mind though, he needs to hear how badly he'd behaved and how badly he's treated them. Maybe it'll sink into that thick skull of his and make him realise how much of an ass he's been!

I'm crying so much! I feel so bad for them both, but Mac, just talk to him! He's hurting too! Jesus, I've never cried at a story so much XD

Chapter 18
Oh Bri.. I knew it had to be something to do with him losing her, I just knew it. But the way he went about it all and the way he treated them will take a lot of grovelling on his part, I don't think they should let him off the hook so easily either. That's if she will even talk to Brian in the first place. My heart broke for him though, even if he was an ass about it, him finally confessing his feelings to Michelle broke my heart.

I'm glad to see he's trying but it's going to take more than that.

Chapter 19
When in doubt, send in the female of the species for a girly day! Haha. I bet Matt is secretly loving being pampered anyway xD

Can I hug him? Pretty please? Haha.

And that is why Matt will always be the better man, he's willing to shove his own pain aside to see to McKenna, not wanting her to hurt if it means him being in pain, what a guy!

But it had all come to breaking point that night when Brian had woken her at 2AM and sobbed into her chest.

The waterfalls are back, man that ending!! So fucking sad and powerful, Matt realising he has to let her go but also realising that Brian is his best friend. I need a hug!! D:

Chapter 20
A mini ZV?!

I wonder sometimes if Brian really has a brain in his head. He caused this in the beginning, his constant pigheadedness was what eventually broke the camel's back and made them break up, he can't just wade in and try to give Matt relationship advice. Not gonna happen buddy.

“McKenna,” she sighed impatiently. “I’m pregnant,” she reminded her. “I’m currently vomiting up everything I eat these days. I’m hungry. I have zero sex drive, so I’m frustrated, and I can’t drink so I’m uptight. You’re a star in my eyes, and you know that. You also know that no matter what, you belong with that stupid guy. So go.” Go Gena, go Gena!! XD

Oh god, and now I'm crying all over again because that was so sweet and adorable! YAY THEY'RE BACK TOGETHER! I'M SO HAPPY! XD

I'm kinda glad too that she admitted she didn't fight hard enough for him, that she was weak and let her brother win. But enough about that, come on Mr Sanders..rock her world ;)

Chapter 21
Rock her world indeed..I think he rocked my world too. Just a simple sentence that had me imaging SO MUCH MORE hahaha

This baby doesn’t want me to get laid, so when the urge strikes, I need to go with it.” Looks like Mr Vengeance is getting some lovin' too hehe.

You’re worried you gave it up too easily, and now that’s all he’ll want from you. Silly worries, that's all. Matt is NOT that guy, he would never treat you like that, you should know that by now.

‘I love you’, he mouthed.

She smiled, pointing her finger to her eye, then her heart, and back at him. Too much cuteness, Cute overload! XD

I LOVED this chapter!!

Chapter 22
Brian slapping Matt like a girl, man that made me laugh!! I'm SO glad and happy that both Brian's gave it their blessing, that they seem to be over the worst of it now and can finally be happy together!

That right there.. has to be the most romantic proposal I have ever read! And afterwards, her telling him not to use a condom cause she wanted to give herself to him. Oh my god, I'm swooning, drowning in feels!

Chapter 23
I'm crying all over again, the party, Matt asking Brian to be his best man, Brian admitting he wasn't ready to let her go and then so much cute that I'm in danger of losing an internal organ!

Chapter 24
I love that they are making out like horny teenagers in Zacky's bathroom, that is priceless!! This is what their relationship should be like, stolen moments in downstairs bathrooms, not being able to keep their hands off each other. Not fighting constantly with Brian. I love this paring SO much! Matt is just, too die for in this!

“When are you and I gonna make a baby?” SWOONING SO BAD OVER HERE! Hahaha

I love how he goes from a complete horny, sexy god of swoon to a complete gentleman in like seconds. So good!

I'm loving all the wedding talk and I know I'll be crying buckets reading about it too!!

Chapter 25
EEEEEP! The baby's coming! :D

“Adorable snores?” Matt snorted, sitting back to look at her. “I can’t be a singer in a metal band and have ‘adorable snores’,” he insisted.

“Fine,” McKenna grinned, grabbing his jaw gently in one hand. “Manly, loud, metal snores.”

Matt grinned and leant in to kiss her. “Much better.”

Oh Matt.

everyone had crowded around her as they got their first look at the first Avenged Sevenfold baby. And now I'm crying again! Dammit, woman! You really know how to mess with the emotions! Haha. Perfect name by the way :)

“What the hell kind of question is that?!” he demanded, tickling her ribs. “Have I ever fucking kissed a guy?!” And now I'm laughing again!!

I absolutely adore their banter!!

Awww poor Matty has Man flu! Bless his cotton socks haha. Sweet that he went straight to McKenna for her to look after him, and his note was hilarious!!! XD

And now I'm all caught up and dying to know what else you have in store for this gorgeous pair! Sorry my comment is so all over the place and rambling in parts, I kinda commented as I read each chapter haha. Sorry for the word explosion too! Haha. I'm just totally in love with this story, the cute moments between Matt and Mac, the tender moments between the guys, the hilariously funny moments, I love it all! *Gives all the gold stickers in the world* Haha

I look forward to your updates of this story, it's awesome. I love Matt and McKenna so much. Please update again soon xx

I love waking up and seeing the email to say this has been updated. Even though I should be getting ready for my lecture, I can't help but read it! Haha! Obviously, can't wait for more!

I really like your story! It got something that most of recent story don't. I think it's the only one I like right now
this couple is adorable.please update