Finding Kimber - Comments

This is a nice story! I like how the mom's overprotective at some parts (like when she was told Kimber to put on a jacket when she didn't need it), although she can be overbearing to me, but I think it's really sweet. I like her family as a whole. Kimber is a very interesting character and I like Beth. I hope you don't mind, but I did notice a few grammatical errors so I think it would be best to use a program like Word, find a free online editor, or even request a site beta, whichever is most convenient to you. Great job on this, otherwise! Keep up the great work!

Aw I like this story. Kimber and Beth are great! :D And her brother whose name just slipped my mind, aww. I will punch her mother tho.

Update soon!

This is really cute and while the mother irks me as a person, all of the other characters seem to be really awesome. I want things to go well for Kimber and Beth and I hope Kimber finds acceptance; hopefully her mother's not too much of a butt. Anyways, keep it up, I'm totally subscribing! :)

THEY'RE GONNA KISS, MHMMM

I agree, can't stand the mother. But... anyway, I love the idea :) You're writing is great and I can't wait to see where it goes!

I love this. I can't wait to see where it goes. I really do give great advice, don't I?