May 9th, 2013 at 05:16am
Haven't read very far, but I do have 2 things to say..
One, punctuation goes a LONG way when it comes to... Anything really.
Two, instead of writing (sp?) after a word, trying searching it in Google. If it's wrong, it'll correct you... Though I have to say, I used to do that sp? thing too :/
But I am loving the story :) Well done
Thank you for liking my story. Yeah I know my punctuation and spelling are horrible to be honest this story is a good 7 years old back before I was able to write properly. As it goes on it does get better, I just haven't taken the time to re write everything. Thank for your the critique, I do appreciate it. :) hope you enjoy the rest of the story.