Just My Luck - Comments

AH.
Just letting you know that this will be my first Blackhawks story to read.
You ARE going to make Sharp work for it, right? [insert stink eye] 'cause Kylie is hurting terribly, so I totally understand if she were to be scared to be turned away again.

Sooooo amazing!!! Update soon please!!

eeek! another amazing chapter! can i just say that my heart dropped when p. sharp made an appearance in this chapter? i wanted to punch him for being so nonchalant with her as if he hadn't left her high and dry for someone else. not to mention kylie's disregard for p. kane because they share the same name (so sad!). with my need to punch p. sharp, i also wanted him to get on his knees and grovel like hell for forgiveness. i mean... it's the least he can do for being such an ass.

jon, jon, jon. i love how he is making his way towards kylie. at first it seemed platonic between the two but there's more obvious feelings (more from jon) by the way he he takes care of her. the fact that he stuck by her side at the wedding, gave her his jacket, and chased after her proves that he is far more dedicated than he leads on.

"My mom always told me that if I kept frowning, my face would stay that way."

he is so adorable for the simplistic measures he takes to put a smile on kylie's face. call me crazy but even though everyone may be for team toews, i am all for team sharp... or team pig to be exact :)

anyways, can't wait for the next update! love this story! ♡

um, i love it already and its only 1 chapter! more!!!

hilarious chapter! keep up the great writing and update soon. and ya kylie is hot wtf is his problem!

Dude, Kylie's hot! What is his problem?
Hahaha. I love how his team is giving him shit!

This story is so good so far! Please update soon!!

same @insomniaticdreams

a great start to the story! can't wait for the next chapter!

so for the good stuff...

i felt so bad for kylie in the beginning. i couldn't even imagine her heartbreak after being engaged to someone only to have the other person break it off for their childhood friend. is there going to be a background/flashback story to how this all went down in future chapters? i hope soooo, the dramatics will just set off the emotions of this story even more.

idk what your plan is for this story but hopefully kylie is one of those girls that believes revenge is best served cold. lol.

recommended & subscribed! :)

Great start!!

❤ it