Cry for the Moon - Comments

  • Even though I'm sure that Mark means well, him poking his nose in where it's obviously not wanted, is just going to push Analii further away. Men aren't the smartest creatures XD

    But I do think that Simone is onto something! tehe

    I WANT TO KNOW WHAT MARK GOT HER!! Twitch
    June 7th, 2014 at 11:58pm
  • @ rachthebat.
    I'm glad you like it!!!
    April 29th, 2014 at 06:01pm
  • I think Ana should let Mark in some more, he's only trying to help. He wouldn't judge if she wanted to open up more and talk about her family. But I can kind of understand why she doesn't want to. Something bad obviously happened to her, surrounding her mother's death? That's making her close up. Whatever happens, she needs to talk to someone, sleep deprivation will end up making her sick.

    I love Elias already, I think I'm going to really like him! :D

    And I love the new banner, but you already knew that, haha.
    April 29th, 2014 at 05:18pm
  • @ rachthebat.
    You're not going out far. ;)

    I will post more soon, I hope! :D
    March 28th, 2014 at 01:32am
  • So, I'm gonna go out on a limb here, and say that she has a huge crush on Mark! tehe I think he likes her back, though.

    Also, the dreams, or zoning out..I'm thinking her father went a bit crazy after her mother died? And her older brother was the one to protect her? I think? Haha.

    More soon, please! :D
    March 27th, 2014 at 06:21pm
  • @ rachthebat.
    Lol! I'm glad you like the chapter!

    You shall see what happens! I have the next chapter done, I just need to type it. :)
    March 15th, 2014 at 07:07pm
  • Glad to be of some use, haha!

    Ohhh, poor Casey! I feel your pain, dude! I hate being woken up, I turn into a dragon! XD I love the playful teasing, it's so sweet and funny!

    LOL, when I read that Ana was trying to stay awake and yawned, I let out a huge yawn and frightened the shit out of my cat XD

    Awwwww, you know, I think Mark might like her back. *wiggles eyebrows*

    NO, YOU CANNOT LEAVE ME WITH THIS CLIFF HANGER! I hope you know, I'm going to bug you until the next chapter is done Con haha.
    March 15th, 2014 at 03:57pm
  • Ahhh cliffhanger. Great chapter but I just have to know what's up next haha.
    March 9th, 2014 at 10:35pm
  • @ rachthebat.

    I'm glad. ^_^

    You just gave me a great idea. xD

    Thanks!
    March 5th, 2014 at 02:58am
  • I'm feeling very special. XD

    I can see why she doesn't want to tell Thomas what happened, but I think she can trust him enough to tell him. He wants to help her. On the other hand, I can see why she wouldn't want to get him involved. Tough times! They're relationship shows well though, he obviously really cares about her.

    Awww, she's got a crushhhh! It's cute. LOL, the image of a sleepy Glenn with batter on his face, so funny!

    Poor Casey! Hahaha. I think they're all going to dive bomb on him XD
    March 5th, 2014 at 02:37am
  • @ rachthebat.
    It made perfect sense. :)

    Good morning to you, then! :D I hope you get to feeling better soon!
    March 2nd, 2014 at 07:51pm
  • @ Symbiont
    *bows* haha. I'm glad they make sense to someone XD

    I've just woken up, this flu is really kicking my ass D: So I'm going to have some tea then get to reading the next chapter! :D
    March 2nd, 2014 at 07:36pm
  • @ Frozen December Moon
    Thanks for the comment! :D It's gonna be good. xD
    March 2nd, 2014 at 02:21am
  • At first I was sad and upset and then I was happy and laughing. I don't know what she'll do to Casey but I have a feeling it's gonna be good.
    March 2nd, 2014 at 01:44am
  • @ rachthebat.
    Crazy

    EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORD EXPLOSION COMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENTS!!!!!!! They make my day! I'm gonna finish up typing the next chapter now!
    March 2nd, 2014 at 12:38am
  • I'm here, finally! XD

    I love the prologue, very well written and thought provoking!

    I unnderstand Issac's pain all too well, my friends are exactly the same as Yves, always nosing at my texts and stealing my phone haha. Althought, I'm liking Yves already, he seems like my kinda person! Haha

    I'd love to know the circumstances surrounding her meet with Kamelot and becoming close to them and Epica. The two stooges, hahaha, I like it!

    I like Mark and Analii's relationship, I sense some kind of tension/mutual love going on there. :D

    I hope you know that that dream is making me think too much haha. So many, not questions, ideas? Running through my head haha.

    Can I have some of that hot chocolate, please? Sounds yummy! I think Roy may be onto something, if she is anxious about the nightmare coming back, it could be her subconcious trying to deal with the anxiety. Or, it could be something completely different and it is trying to tell her something. Only time will tell, I suppose. But I am so damn intriugued!

    Hahaha, oh hell no, no one steals bacon!

    Oh, OH! That one line is the line from her dream! Curiouser and curiouser!!

    What had happened that night.. More intrigue!

    “Mark! I think the girls are planning to kill us!” Hahaha, I love Casey! I love the dynamic of all of their relationships, they're really close but they're all really laid back and funny!

    Awww, she likes himmmm! They are cute together :D

    *flips shit*

    Wait, what? O_O Someone attacked her? Oh my god! I wasn't expecting that! I can't wait to find out what it was she was running away from when she asked to go on tour with them. Maybe the person that beat her? From what I read, she knew the person who did it, knew them well. Hmm. My mind is going crazy! If I'm understanding right, from those sequences to the dreams, to the flashback of her friend reading up on law books..she witnessed a murder? Her best friend's murder. Maybe the person that attacked her was the murderer or was there at the time, and wants Ana to keep her mouth shut. Maybe that's the dream! If no one will hear their testimony, that could mean that they want her to keep quiet, hence not hearing the testimony! So many questions, gah! Crazy

    Cannot wait for the next chapter!! :D
    March 2nd, 2014 at 12:20am
  • @ Frozen December Moon
    I'm glad you liked it. :) It'll make a bit more sense in the next chapter!
    February 25th, 2014 at 12:49am
  • I love the update. That whole scene with the weapon had me wondering like what? Anyways awesome update as always.
    February 25th, 2014 at 12:00am
  • @ Xia;
    Glad you like it! :D
    February 14th, 2014 at 04:09am
  • LOVE. LOVE. LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!
    Koda and Roy and I'm getting serious metal feels from all of this again. Can't wait to see what you've planned! :)
    February 14th, 2014 at 04:06am