The Last Drop - Comments

This is great description! Love your layout with the background of peter pan :) Alex and Madeline are cute together! I don't tend to be very fond of romantic stories so I didn't read the whole thing but this was good! One thing I noticed was that your summary was really good. It didn't give too much away, yet it brought the reader into the story. Keep up the good work! :)

Okay, so I looked back at my comment and decided it could use a little more detail. Your writing style is quite great, especially for the mibbain format. It's easy to follow and the story itself has these little quirks that make it original and cute. I love how each of the character have their own personalities, sure they have similar attributes, but they're all their own people. The only thing is that you might want to take a look at some of the chapters because Alex and Finley got switched for Harry and Niall. Other than that, truly fantastic story, please keep it up!

This is a really great story! I absolutely love Alex and his sass.

YOU NEED TO UPDATE. this is awesome, honestly. you're very descriptive, and idk they would just be so cute together. i love the idea of them kinda hating each other then falling in love. it's so adorable. you're a pretty good writer. i hope you write more like this. :-)

YOU NEED TO UPDATE. this is awesome, honestly. you're very descriptive, and idk they would just be so cute together. i love the idea of them kinda hating each other then falling in love. it's so adorable. you're a pretty good writer. i hope you write more like this. :-)

YOU NEED TO UPDATE. this is awesome, honestly. you're very descriptive, and idk they would just be so cute together. i love the idea of them kinda hating each other then falling in love. it's so adorable. you're a pretty good writer. i hope you write more like this. :-)

I like the idea as well. Made me actually go look up the band and I love their music :3 though a little spell check here and their helps and you talk a LOT of the story itself, so maybe let the characters speak a little more?

Apparently, I'm supposed to tell the author if I made a comment through Comment Swap or something...

Hey! I love the whole idea behind this, but I think you accidently put in the wrong names for Alex and Finley when you said Niall and Harry...? But other than that, I love the banter between Alex and Madeline. ;) Hopefully, we get to see more of their relationship??

I love the idea of this story! Im subscribed. Its totally amazing and you're a great author!

Anyways, update soon please!

xoxoxoxxos ,

Love Katy