I kind of figured. Why would Zac be engaged to an another person if he still had feelings for his ex-neighbour? But I do feel bad for her. To think that the boy she liked had *** with her the night before and to wake up and find out it was just dream? That's kind-of sad. Good update though and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I just found this story and I’m loving it so far. I love how you wrote the Prologue because I felt like I was seeing the story through the eyes of child. Then in the first chapter she was much older. Good job on writing those 2 parts. Not everyone can pull that off.
I’m already love all the characters. But I feel so bad for Cher since she really liked Zac and he is already happily married. But he should have told her. (Even if it is person-to-person news)
I’m not particularly fond of the layout though. I think it would be cool to add pictures of the main characters, but it’s your story.
Overall, awesome start and I look forward to reading more.