This plot line is so unique and refreshing and I just love it. I'm so used to the stereotypical boy meets depressed girl, fixes all of her problems, and they get married. Here you have this complex, amazing idea filled with endless potential.
I'm usually against having long first chapters but this is my only exception. Since you have such an interesting plot I feel as if the long first chapter is necessary to get all of the drama set up. All I want to know is why exactly "Hazel" and "Spencer" have to continuously change identities. Is it something their parents started? Are they immortal? Are they trying to hide a dark secret? Endless questions are spitting through my mind and I want answers... now!
I also love how the story isn't carried by dialogue but instead of the narrator's thoughts. The only thing I would suggest adding is a bit more details about body language and the setting instead of just saying where they are and one quality about the place.
Overall, I think this story is kickass and the layout matches it very well.
I'm usually against having long first chapters but this is my only exception. Since you have such an interesting plot I feel as if the long first chapter is necessary to get all of the drama set up. All I want to know is why exactly "Hazel" and "Spencer" have to continuously change identities. Is it something their parents started? Are they immortal? Are they trying to hide a dark secret? Endless questions are spitting through my mind and I want answers... now!
I also love how the story isn't carried by dialogue but instead of the narrator's thoughts. The only thing I would suggest adding is a bit more details about body language and the setting instead of just saying where they are and one quality about the place.
Overall, I think this story is kickass and the layout matches it very well.