Splitting Pearls - Comments

@ OurLullaby
Thanks so much! Updates might be a little slow during April, since it's my last month of grad school--- but you can count on regular updates after that.

In all honesty, I just read the prequel and this in about three hours (stopping to go out for lunch in there, even story obsessed I need food) and I would just like to say... I absolutely love them. I like how they are in a bit of second person, I've always loved when the narrator speaks to the reader. Keep up the lovely work :) I am very excited to see where this goes. I relate to Flo and Marcus so much. Their story is close to one I am living. Haha. :)

-T

I want flo and Marcus back together so badly!!!

Great start! Can't wait to hear the rest of Flo's story.
Update soon!<3

I'm excited to see what Flo is going to do. I hate that she's become a man-eater because she's so hurt about Marcus. I'm excited to see where it goes and if she'll get back together with him. I don't know, it's too early to decide what I want to happen. Please update as soon as possible.

Good chapter. There were a few times when flo referred to heralded in the third person and also calls Carson Marcus at the end so maybe you want to give the chapter a once over but I am curious to see what's next