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  • onewritestand

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    @ the right girl
    I am trying to update, but there's a lot to do. Like picking the books I'm going to bring. That's the hardest part of packing. I hear for most girls the "what clothes will I bring" is a dilemma.

    @ cantcontainit
    Clearly you're Kristen Wiig wearing a mustache.
    August 22nd, 2013 at 08:48am
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    @ onewritestand
    I would like that. I recently had someone tell me I reminded them of Kristen Wiig and River Song in the same night so that was pretty close.

    but then today at work someone drew a Hitler stash on my university id so that is a less flattering comparison.

    WHAT KIND OF PERSON AM I. I AM LOST.
    August 22nd, 2013 at 03:31am
  • the right girl

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    Ahh I can't imagine what Im going to do when you're gone for 3 weeks and I can't read this story! Hopefully you update before you go because I'm obsessed
    August 22nd, 2013 at 02:00am
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    @ cantcontainit
    I just marathoned your comments it was beautiful someone needs to make you an award.
    August 21st, 2013 at 10:02pm
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    @ onewritestand
    did you like the one I just left last night on intrinsic gray where I also simultaneously cried about my personal life? I was coming up with conspiracy theories today to explain why my life is the way that it is.
    August 21st, 2013 at 07:57am
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    @ xmunch
    Heh, the next update is going to be it as far as updates go for a while, because I am going to hide in the mountains for anywhere from one week to three... <3 SORRY. I will definitely be writing when I am up there, so there's that? Thank you for commenting xx

    @ cynicalqueen
    It's okay, my life lacks substance and I am unapologetic about it.

    @ cantcontainit
    Wow, hi, I'm a big fan of your comments (especially the ones on Sam's stories). They always make me smile or laugh out loud! <3
    August 21st, 2013 at 07:01am
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    When I turn around with the red pizza carrier in my hand I catch Niall in the act of taking a sip of my drink. He swallows and gives me a sheepish grin, holding out my drink to me.
    -god that's cute

    In the end I do end up ordering something off of the kid's menu for Niall. We sit across from each other in the booth furthest from Giovanna, who crosses her arms in irritation at being excluded.
    -that's funny

    It takes all the self-restraint I have not to reach across the table and forcibly wipe his fingers and face with a napkin dampened with the condensation from my frap.
    -oh my god

    I force myself to look up at his face, though the image of his abs will likely stay with me forever.
    -oh my god

    I turn my head and see Firefighter Zack closing a Dora the Explorer umbrella.
    -whaaaaaat are you doing

    As soon as the words leave his mouth I know that they're going to be a permanent thing, and that it will annoy everyone in a five foot radius of them.
    -COUPLES

    Just like an idiot in a horror movie.
    -perf

    I push off from the window and walk out into the rain.
    -oh okay have them kiss in the rain. fucking rude.
    August 20th, 2013 at 11:58pm
  • cynicalqueen

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    The rain scene was perfect (sorry this comment lacks substance, I'll try to make it up to you).
    August 20th, 2013 at 10:37pm
  • xmunch

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    This is just so cute and well-written. I'm in love with Bixby as a character and all of Giovannas family, even if her mom went a little overboard with the whole Harry situation. but I like them together and I like how they are heating up. That last kiss was perfect, too. I can't wait for the next chapter(:
    August 20th, 2013 at 03:42pm
  • onewritestand

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    @ show me love
    First: I adore comments like this. :3 Second: My favourite kind of pizza is butter chicken pizza with extra sauce and light cheese. I've never tried a big mac pizza and I don't like a lot of tomato sauce, either. Though, I do love tomatoes and sometimes I have tomato and mayo sammiches.

    This girl I know and her boyfriend recently made a macaroni and cheese pizza because they couldn't agree on what to eat. That might be the title of the next chapter ;)

    Psst, I can't ride a bike either, for the same reason. I'm pretty sure Harry has ruined a lot of lives.

    Sadly for you (and happy for me, like extremely happy) I will be going away on holiday for an undetermined amount of time. I leave next weekend, but I will be updating before I go. Hopefully more than once. Thanks so much for commenting, subscribing and recommending. You're a gem!
    August 19th, 2013 at 10:04am
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    Chicken caesar salad pizza or big mac pizza is the best. I'd rather have those any day, than a pepperoni pizza.
    I was in Chicago last month, and didn't try pizza while I was over there haha. Not a huge fan of a lot of tomato sauce though, since I don't like tomatoes.
    Also I hope you don't mind comments like these... 'cause they might become a regular thing. They have with sylvia wrath's, Sam's, Haley's, and Ashley's stories.
    I couldn't imagine being the youngest of five kids haha.
    Omg, a bottle of hot sauce for protection lmfao
    Louis the sassmaster. Him and I would probably bite each other's heads off. I don't always let my sassy side out, but when I do, oh no haha.
    I feel you, Bixby. I look at Harry and just kind of get irritated with him for being my undoing. Bloody attractive British boy.
    I wish I could ride a bicycle... but no such luck. Too many ear infections as a kid screwed up my balance.
    The Avengers is an awesome movie.
    Holy crap, those are huge tips.
    It's the kind of low rasp that a girl would be lucky to fall asleep to. Yes. You described Harry's voice perfectly.
    I love it when people smile with their eyes and mouth. It just makes it a million times more genuine.
    People always comment on how quiet I speak... 'cause I'm really quiet, unless I'm excited or really into talking about something. It gets kind of annoying. It's like "yes I know I talk quietly. you can shut up now." tehe
    The rooftop garden sounds gorgeous, but I'd have a massive anxiety attack from how high up it is, omg.
    I feel that Harry would be exactly that way in a conversation. Listening very intently to every word you say.
    Drinking water has never looked so hot. lmfao Agreed.
    I knew as soon as Bixby handed Niall her drink, he was going to drink some of it haha. Don't hand Niall any foods or drinks.
    "That boy likes anyone who feeds him." lmfao Probably true, in real life.
    I just realized that you're a Canadian 'cause you use the word pencil crayons instead of colored pencils. I talk to a couple people who live in Canada haha.
    Ugh, I love this so far! Subscribed and recommended :D I can't wait for the next chapter!
    August 19th, 2013 at 09:34am
  • onewritestand

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    @ Anchor and Hope.
    The next chapter should be fun, and hopefully it won't be the last one I post before I go on vacation, but it might be. And I'm not even sure when I'm coming back. I'm going to get so much reading and writing done, though.

    @ ThoughtWeWereDancing
    I hope those ohs are a very good thing. :) Brace yourself the next time you see me update. BRACE. YOURSELF. I am not even prepared and I am the writer gosh.

    @ strawberrybubble
    There is when it makes your tummy ache :( AND I ADORE YOU <3 Especially because when I see your avatar I tend to melt inside, just a little bit.

    @ Sina92
    It makes me crave pizza, too, but pizza makes me really sick. It's a hard knock life.

    @ the right girl
    I'll be sure to update before I leave on vacation. Annnnnd then everyone has to wait up to 2.5 weeks for the next update. I'm cruel. Someone make me a sexy villain costume. I need to practice my maniacal laughter. MWHAHAHAHAHAHA. No, no, that's not it. Back to the drawing board.

    @ skyelilly
    Mmm no I think we're due for some serious fluffy action before the drama happens. But there will be drama. Oh yes there will.

    @ formerlyknownas
    Just you wait. You should yodel yourself hoarse next chapter.

    @ vices
    Firefighter Zack is kind of cute, even if he is all lean and dumb-college-boy. I have such an unrealistic crush on Liam Payne, it's torture. Also Niall. I just want to wrap my arms around him and rock from side to side while stroking his hair. Which is how I feel about 80% of the people I can actually stand. Which isn't a lot. People are kind of gross. But not you. You're lovely. <3
    August 18th, 2013 at 10:47pm
  • vices

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    OKAY YEP IF I WASN'T SIRE THEN IM SURE NOW
    IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY
    omg dramatic kissing in the rain scene and AW LIAM AND NIALL ARE SUCH CUTIEE
    FIREFIGHTER ZACK SOUNDS PRECIOUS TOO ;))))))
    August 18th, 2013 at 08:34am
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    [YODELS]
    August 17th, 2013 at 10:28pm
  • Skyelilly

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    God I love Niall. THey kissed! I hope that that everyone doesn't freak out over them, like her friends Mom and everything
    August 17th, 2013 at 05:59pm
  • the right girl

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    Ahhhh they kissed! New chapter soon please!!!
    August 17th, 2013 at 05:08pm
  • Sina92

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    also this story makes me HUNGRY. I have pizza cravings
    August 17th, 2013 at 03:13pm
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    also this story makes me HUNGRY. I have pizza cravings
    August 17th, 2013 at 03:13pm
  • Sina92

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    omg please write the next chapter soon
    August 17th, 2013 at 03:13pm
  • strawberrybubble

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    I adore you so much. And there is no such thing as too much peanut butter =)
    August 17th, 2013 at 07:20am