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  • witch.

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    Oh my god how am I supposed to live a normal life with this story existing, I ask you.
    It's too perfect and that last part and Niall's part and just oh. Oh.
    August 17th, 2013 at 07:09am
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    "Would yah like ta find out fer yerself?" Naughty
    Why yes Niall. I would love nothing more.

    OMFG THE FEELS. I CAN'T EVEN.
    I was like- I should go to bed "SHE UPDATED? AW SHIT. SO MUCH FOR BED."
    I am (already) so anxious for the next chapter Facepalm
    August 17th, 2013 at 07:05am
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    "Would yah like ta find out fer yerself?" Naughty
    Why yes Niall. I would love nothing more.

    OMFG THE FEELS. I CAN'T EVEN.
    I was like- I should go to bed "SHE UPDATED? AW SHIT. SO MUCH FOR BED."
    I am (already) so anxious for the next chapter Facepalm
    August 17th, 2013 at 07:05am
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    @ sylvia wrath
    You mean to say she puts the spicy in the Spicy Italian Pizza?

    Yeah. I did. Sorrynotsorry.
    August 17th, 2013 at 06:58am
  • sylvia wrath

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    Um shirtless Liam Payne gimme gimme gimme now and also THAT KISS. SPICY. ME GUSTA SO MUCH.
    August 17th, 2013 at 06:54am
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    @ ThoughtWeWereDancing
    Thank you so much. I'm working on the next chapter. Just had a busy few days. :3
    August 16th, 2013 at 04:17am
  • witch.

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    Ugh this is so wonderfully perfect, I'll never get over it.
    August 15th, 2013 at 03:25pm
  • onewritestand

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    @ We'll Be A Dream ;;
    Thanks. Heh. I dislike my name, but at least I wasn't named after a Poodle.

    @ S. Stilinski.
    Thank you. May I say that I love your username and avatar? I've got a biiiiiigbigbigbig crush on Dylan O'Brien.
    August 13th, 2013 at 04:21am
  • edgar allan no.

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    Godaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaamn this is good. Mr. Green I'm in love. Swoon
    August 13th, 2013 at 02:00am
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    Such a great chapter! It was good to see Harry and Bixby interact, and find out about Bixby's name!
    August 11th, 2013 at 11:02pm
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    @ saratastic
    Oh yeah, Bixby is well aware of how to interact with the male species. She is definitely no stranger to flirting. Even though his celebrity can be a little intimidating, she just needs about 20 seconds of insane bravery :D

    @ Anchor and Hope.
    I had mono like two years ago and I honestly had every symptom except for one and life was just awful because I couldn't just rest and get better there was too much going on at the time. But I looked up the side effects for the medication I'm taking right now and this could just be a side effect. :)

    I intended to put more into the introduction of Bixby's mom, but I was really tired and spent a lot of time on Hixby interaction. And I'm glad that you found her name amusing! I was like "Bixby is an odd name and needs a funny origin story... she's gonna be named after the family Poodle" :) I'm also glad that you like Harry.

    @ vices
    I have so many Liam feels. Most of them are of the oh god oh god OH MY GOD CAN YOU STOP PLEASE I CAN'T HANDLE THIS ANYMORE variety.

    Hahaha Liam and Niall, setting Harry and Bixby up on a surprise rooftop garden date. What meddling little shits <3 ARE YOU BACK YET DO YOU NEED A TISSUE? Arms

    @ skyelilly
    Have you ever been in that situation where suddenly everyone is scattering and leaving you alone with one other person? There is nothing subtle about it and you spend about ten minutes trying to figure out if you missed a silent "gtfo" signal from the other person, or if you were the one who sent them running.

    I'll start writing the next chapter now just because everyone gave me such lovely comments :3
    August 11th, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • Skyelilly

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    I think that the guys trying to be subtle is one of my favorite things in the world! Her and Harry were too cute in the garden. I just have a really bad feeling that this is going to come back and bite her. But, I also think that now that Harry knows that she has gotten in trouble because of him he is going to come to the pizzeria and introduce himself to everyone:) I can't wait for more though seriously.
    August 11th, 2013 at 03:54pm
  • vices

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    LIAM REALLY COULD BE THE DEVIL OR THE ANGEL UGH
    and omg rooftop garden
    blankets
    obvi it's a date
    oh my goodness gracious Bixby is one deep soul
    NO OMG SHE GOT TO KEEP HARRY'S BLANKET brb sobbing / squealing
    August 11th, 2013 at 08:38am
  • Anchor and Hope.

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    Mono is awful Cry I wouldn't wish it upon anyone.
    Hopefully you just have a virus.

    And um, how 'bout I loved this?
    Her name? HILARIOUS.
    Harry is just so sweet and so wonderful.
    Though I'll admit, I still don't know how to feel about Bixbys mom. She seems to be the polar opposite of Bixby...
    August 11th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • saratastic

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    god this is a cRAZY TIME READING THSI STORY MAKES ME FEEL INSANE BECAUSE I FEEL ALL HER FEELINGS AND I WANT THEM AND I LOVE HARRY AND THEY'RE SO CLOSE IN THIS CHAPTER LIKE I THOUGHT SHE WOULD BE SHY BUT SHE'S LIKE FLIRTY AND IT'S SO GREAT AND IT'S SO NICE AND I WANT TO READ IT FOREVER
    August 11th, 2013 at 06:53am
  • onewritestand

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    @ sylvia wrath
    Because I have a lot of Liam feels, too and they are leaking out in here because I have no outlet for them at all. The struggle is real. Also I like your comments about Bixby's mom.

    @ sandrashameless
    Thank you darling :)
    August 11th, 2013 at 06:20am
  • sandrashameless

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    i love this so much omg i just can't handle it
    August 11th, 2013 at 06:14am
  • sylvia wrath

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    The boy smiles, and it is such a sincere action, so genuine and warm. He's a rare soul that smiles with his eyes and his mouth. He offers me his hand.

    This is a Harry story why are you giving me Liam feels????

    And for the first time I see Liam as the kind of boy who is trouble. It's in the smirk that twists his lips, the look in his eye that says he's up to something. Liam Payne could play both the angel and the devil on your shoulder if he wanted to.

    I just want to get in trouble with him, okay? And that says something bc I do not do trouble STOP.

    Like every word I say is vital. Like there is nothing more important than this one-sided conversation about people he's never met and likely never will meet.

    Ugh I am imaging this look and it is great.

    Late night garden talks are awesome and feels but also WHAT NOW? No numbers were exchanged. That was it. Harry, damnit, you are smoother than that my guess is he goes to Nonna's and ALSO Bixby's mom seems very ~hip and ~cool!!!
    August 11th, 2013 at 06:05am
  • onewritestand

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    @ We'll Be A Dream ;;
    Thank you. :) <3
    August 10th, 2013 at 01:40am
  • We'll Be A Dream ;;

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    Also love that the story title is my user name :) obviously meant for greatness
    August 8th, 2013 at 07:53am