The Art of Deflowering - Comments

  • Prettyprideyouth

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    Please update soon! I've reread this story 3 times already. I am so in love! Embarassed
    April 7th, 2014 at 10:42am
  • HuggerOfTrees

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    pls update soon i love this story so much!!
    January 21st, 2014 at 02:57am
  • mmatasmilie

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    Omg hot. I can't wait for the next one you have in store for us :3
    January 3rd, 2014 at 04:15pm
  • vices

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    OH MY GOD
    SHE WAS HAVING A WET DAYDREAM I AM DYING
    wait was it announced before that Lydia's her cousin bc if not WHAT I DID NOT SEE THIS COMING but hey apple does not fall far from other apple
    wait does Stydia exist in this story
    bc dat is detrimental to Georgiles / Stiorgia (i prefer the former)
    BUT HEY WOOHOO I'M EXCITED FOR THAT NEXT CHAPTER
    JUST LIKE EVERY CHAPTER
    YEAH THIS IS KIND OF A BAD OBSESSION
    January 3rd, 2014 at 07:37am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    :D Get it, gurl!
    January 2nd, 2014 at 05:06am
  • dawn of light

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    oh snap home girl
    pls dont hurt bby stiles
    I LOVE HIME DEARLY OKAY?
    also, i love how she's having second thoughts on her plan to play stiles
    of course she has feelings for stiles! LOL
    but i could see her character change bc of the way stiles is acting towards her, unlike most guys
    G, BE GOOD TO STILES, WILL YA?!
    cannot wait for the study date on da friday night woohoo
    January 1st, 2014 at 10:29am
  • Lilly-Ann

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    HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON IT'S SOOO GOOD xx
    December 24th, 2013 at 11:20pm
  • vices

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    GEORGIA NO DON'T SUCK AND HUMP AND DUMP OKAY
    STILES IS AN IMPORTANT FIGURE IN MY LIFE (((I LOVE HIM)))
    u hurt him prepare to feel the wrath of my stale bagels and some glittery ass lettermans
    November 18th, 2013 at 03:14am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    If I was like Georgia, I would question everything too. But I wouldn't fight it exactly.
    November 17th, 2013 at 10:11pm
  • dawn of light

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    WELL I AM NOT JEALOUS AT ALL
    September 23rd, 2013 at 06:52am
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    oh my god
    that is exactly how Stiles talks though oh my god this is too great
    WHAT HANDCREAM DO YOU USE
    WHAT HANDCREaM DO YOU USe
    NO GOODBYE STILES I'M DONE
    omg Georgia why are u not squealing bc Stiles just kissed ur forehead ummmmmmm
    September 8th, 2013 at 08:40pm
  • permanentdeclaration

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    Stiles tehe
    September 5th, 2013 at 03:24am
  • Discontinued

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    Awe, that was too sweet. Lovely update. Though all of the interruptions from everyone was annoying rofl!
    September 4th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Lol! He's working his way into her heart and they don't even know it! <3
    September 3rd, 2013 at 04:05pm
  • broken bells

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    HOW HAVE I NOT FOUND THIS STORY BEFORE? Okay.
    This is fabulous. You literally could not have paired this plot with a better character in this show because, hello, adorable and innocent Stiles' virginity is somebody's mission to take away? (I don't think I worded that right but oh well lmfao) I really think this is the perfect idea for a Stiles story and I really can't wait to see where this goes. Cute
    August 20th, 2013 at 05:54am
  • Minnesota518

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    yes hello i love this please and thank you i think you should update this all the time. also awkward stiles is wonderful so maybe more of that yes.

    anyways. this is wonderfully written, it flows really well, it's easy to read and there's an amusing air about the entire thing. Georgia is so easy going but also aware and i like that her target is Stiles. as;dfja;skfjsa;lkajsdflk can't wait to read more :)
    August 19th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • blackenedrose

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    The Stiles and the Georgia and the talking and the cuteness and it's just ugh and perfect and wonderful. I should stop rambling but my love for this story knows no bounds. Making Stiles all cute and flustered. Georgia is a queen and I love her attitude and her no nonsense about anything. I want more, no I need more! Update soon, please. Sorry for the rambling lol
    August 19th, 2013 at 08:05am
  • writhing

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    But in all seriousness, I think that this idea is wonderful! I love the way you've written the chapters so far; it reads easily and it flows well too, but I also like that you kinda get a feel for Georgia's personality through your writing style and how she's so nonchalant about deflowering boys. AND I LOVE GEORGIA. I can totally picture her being in the show and making Stiles feel all flustered and awkward and cute.

    I think you've written everything wonderfully so far, and I hope you'll update soon! Very Happy

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    so, that was my attempt at leaving a somewhat decent comment. I apologize for its terribleness!
    August 19th, 2013 at 06:38am
  • writhing

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    OH GOD
    OH
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    THIS STORY IS KILLING ME
    I'M LITERALLY LIKE SPEECHLESS
    I CAN'T EVEN THINK OF A MEANINGFUL COMMENT TO LEAVE YOU OTHER THAN I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT
    August 19th, 2013 at 06:24am
  • dawn of light

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    HAHAHAH i love how she admits to herself about forgetting Isaac and getting ride of him
    WHISPER DIRTY NOTHINGS TO STILES HAHAHAH girl you crack me up
    i bet Coach made them feel uneasy BC THAT'S IN HIS NATURE lmao
    i'd check out his butt too, tbh AND IDC <333 heh
    ooOoooo ISAAC FIESTY ME LIKEY
    STILES IS MY BBY omg i love how she admires him
    YES STILES IS CUTTTTTE
    Stiles is so awkward and cute i love it!
    homie girl georgia is getting what she wants really fast!
    but i'd so give her props if she could get stiles at her party
    August 19th, 2013 at 05:51am