The Art of Deflowering - Comments

OH MY GOD I LOVE HER SO MUCH
"THAT'S BECAUSE I ALREADY FINISHED IT. SEE YOU FRIDAY, STILES." I'M DYING THIS IS BRILLIANT
party sexxx ;))))
Isaac why you gotta be like that omg

I have to agree with waves. Stiles does have a nice ass. Also, he does shoulder a LOT of shit that goes on in Beacon Hills. Isaac, don't be such a bad boy. Stop cockblocking Georgia and Stiles....even if Stiles is in the dark about her future conquest. Haha.

Lol! I like Georgia. Can't wait to see what she has in store for Stiles.
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UGH GEORGIA HUN YOU HAVE NO IDEA
like 1, stiles ass is perf. honestly have you seen that shit? i mean stiles and derek hands down have the best asses on that show, even vs the girls on that show, stiles and derek would win that shit everytime uh.
ALSO GEORGIA HUN SRSLY
nothing ever gets past stiles or rolls off of him like babe, i wish that was true but sadly no i mean the many meltdowns he has (i mean he's uber cute and emotional through all of them), he goes through life with a ton of shit hanging over his head. ugh, poor bby.

ISAAC YOU LIL COCKBLOCKIN" SHIT
if that girl wants to take a ride on the stilinski train, you let her get that one way ticket k
still love isaac tho. stiles is just so nonchalant it actually hurts because the cuteness and the awks ugh
how that evolves into me having sexual frustration is kinda just a no brainer because uhm stiles, hello? yeah. he's too cute.

A LITTLE AWKWARD BUT A LOT CUTE
THAT IS THE SUM OF STILES'S LIFE
omg
I'd get a million detentions if Stiles would be in them
ILYSM STILES

Extremely interested to see where this goes! The concept is so uncanny because Stiles is just all over awkward and sex all at the same time. I'm pretty sure my Stiles feels will be all over the place once you get this up and running. Can't wait.

I would love for her to tease Stiles and see him get all flustered. It'd be awesome! I love when the character plots and can be manipulative. It's just so much fun to read and go along with. I can't wait for detention! Never thought I'd say those words before...

wow hahaha Georgia has made her observations on her boys hahahahha
glad she isn't a home wrecker!
Also, your writing has a nice flow and it's easy for me to follow c:
she didn't need extra drama hahhahaha true
I like how she has her reasons about not knowing if a girl likes a guy. That's a very true fact lmao
She's cousin's with Lydia???
that's a tough one bc Stiles has a thing for Lydia! OooOOo snap!
HAHHAHAHAH Coach Finstock is hilarious as ever!!!
ooooh detention! LOLOLOL
I would check out Stiles too if I had the chance ;))
omg she's so clever o___O
I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS IN DETENTION
i really want to despise her but I think there's more to her

POWER OF STILES
Oh god, I'm lovin Georgia's confidence and I love tht you hose not to have her automatically in Scott's circle/pack at school because I feel like this angle seems more realistic (even its a supernatural teen wolf fic lmao).

But jfc
Plus, she had her eye on Isaac for a bit, but it soon became apparent that he had issues, with his father and all. So Georgia wasn’t interested.
Idk how to feel about that because isaac lmao but it's okay, everyone has their presences and I just love Georgia's nonchalance like she seems so normal and inside she's plotting in how to devirginise boys

I have to admit, this is pretty cute. I don't know if it's supposed to be cute but nothing sexy is happening yet so I find this cute. Georgia is a very...interesting character. I'm not sure if I've ever seen a character who's main goal was to deflower virgin boys. I haven't read many 1D stories so I can't comment on if any of this has been done a million times before but I think the deflowering idea really gives the story a cool and fresh spin. Also, it seems that Harry isn't famous in this story (I could be wrong but I didn't see any indication that he was) which makes the story more believable and realistic.

I also liked how she described her growing infatuation with him and how she played connect the dots on his face in her mind. That was hilarious.

The police station and troublemaker bit seemed a little bit cliché, but Georgia shows some good potential for being a multi-dimensional character.

I really can't wait to see how this story turns out.

*ahem* Please ignore my 1D comments. I don't know why my brain switched to thinking it was 1D fanfic.

I have to admit, the idea is seeming a bit cliche to me at this point BUT the devirginizing ads a whole new spin on it that I'm anxious to see. Your writing style is also interesting, so I'm looking forward to how this will be written. Lovely job so far! ♡

the whole idea of this story is so unique and I'm definitely excited to see where this lovely piece is going! The layout is really simple and I love it because then you can focus on the text, which is the part that really matters :).

Oh a troublemaker, I absolutely love reading about rebellious characters so woo! I also share Georgia's curiosity to the locker room talk boys have. If the girls talk about boys, then the boys must talk about us! I want to know haha!

and oh, feelings. It always gets complicated once emotions start stirring around. I can't wait to see how Georgia deals with these romantic feelings and how Stiles feels about her. I'M READY.

GEORGIA
MM GIRL U GOIN INTO SOME DEEP WATERS WITH THIS ONE
STILES IS A WANTED MAN
idk i think u gonna fight a lotta girls to get 2 him lulz
lbr Stiles is perfection
and although you are portrayed by Nina Dobrev, idk about u yet

Everyone loves Stiles and I'm pretty sure everyone would love to devirginize him. Myself included. I can't wait to see what happens with this! Update soon!

YOU'VE MADE MY STILES FEELS SO MUCH WORSE GAWD THIS IS AMAZING THANK YOU-

OHMY GOSH I CAN SO SEE THIS HAPPENING
you're writing is so smooth and perfect
I WANT TO PASS BY JACKSON, STILES AND DANNY
oooOOoo and idk if you're going to bring Scott or Isaac in but that'd be amazing ;)
SHE'S GOING TO TAKE AWAY STILES VIRGINITY

Omg, this story though.

I started reading it even though I actually have no idea who Stiles is I feel like people are gonna be bringing out pitchforks because of the title. And the story didn't disappoint at all. This is so great.

I liked how you didn't really give much of the story away, I mean, you kind of told us the entire plot in this first chapter, but you added so much mystery with the last sentence that I still feel like I have no idea what's gonna happen.

The layout is great too, I really like the picture you used for the banner. I like when layours are so simple like this, it makes everything a lot easier to read and almost adds to the mystery of the story, in a way.

Anyways, I'm incredibly excited to see where this goes!

I am so excited for this story!

WHAT ARE YOU TRYING TO DO TO US, ALEX?! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL US? BECAUSE THAT IS WHAT YOU'RE DOING.

I loved your writing. Hands down, some of your best to date. I need more.... NOW.

Oh my fucking god no
You can't do this to me do you know my feels right now
Because i dont
And im going out of my mind oh my god
I just ugh i wanna cry like everyone's making so many goddamn beautiful teen wolf fics like
MY HEART HURTS THIS IS NOT OKAY
and also your writing is really lovely okay and yeah ilysm and pretty much everything you write ok yeah make more pls~