Ah! I'm so happy this was updated. I was just thinking about it the other day, lol. I'm curious if Lionel will confront Edwin and when he'll admit his feelings to Violet. He seems like the kind of guy that wouldn't put that kind of news on her right after she's had her heart broken, but I'm impatient and just want them together already haha
This is the cutest fucking story I've ever read on Mibba and I am in love. Violet is the sweetest girl ever, and I just wanna wrap her up in a blanket and make her hot chocolate with marshmallows if she likes them. If she doesn't I can try my best to make her something she does like, if Lionel doesn't do it before me. I love them so much. OMG. I would very much love it if you continued this story.
Edwin is such a dink, and as much as I don't want to say it, one helluva good actor, because he sure fooled me! I'm also kind of mad at Angelica too, because she forced Violet into this, well not really forced, but used her charm on her innocent heart. Lionel is my absolute favorite and so so sweet! At first he came off as a fuck boy, but holy man. He is not at all. Not the way he is with Violet. I'm in love with both of these characters and the way you write them.
I adore this story to bits, and imma smack myself on the head for not reading earlier, especially when I had recommended this story before.
I even told my sister about this story too when I stopped reading in the middle because we were on our way to Walmart. Haha! My favorite part was when they went out for lunch and she stopped by the Mexican place to buy him tacos. And when he loved her Christmas gift she made, even though it wasn't for him. I was so sad when she gave his gift to Edwin instead, but in the end it was a much better outcome.
This is very well written and your detail is perfect, each chapter flows nicely from one to the next and leaves you wanted to read more. I really like your name choices in this aswell.
I knew it! Edwin was just too good to be true, though he was no Lionel, lol. I got so excited when I saw you updated, I checked back every night just to see if you had. No pressure with updating as frequently either (as much as I'm sure everyone would love but) because when you do, its always outstanding! ♥
Lionel is slowly, but surely coming to terms with his feelings hehe. I'm excited to see how Violet begins to realise the same, and also realise what a douche Edwin is.
I'm so sorry to hear about your struggles with writing. I think all writers go through those dark times but I am so very sorry that happened to you. I hope things look up for you and your writing because I absolutely adore it and I am just over the moon to see this story is back up! I missed it greatly and I missed you.
I'm not buying into the whole Edwin Being Sweet thing, definitely think something strange is going on with him! But anytime that Violet and Lionel have any sort of interaction I get so excited! I absolutely love them together!
Oh my god this has always been my favorite chapter because it's SO cute and you can feel the character dynamics changing. Edwin was seriously RUDE for just leaving her gifts there, she obviously worked hard on them! Anyway, great chapter as always!
Edwin is so rude :/ who leaves their gift behind??? that was a low move. I am suspicious now, why is he always sick and busy? what's he up to hmmm. but Lionel saved the day, that was so cute. Violet was slightly jealous when Lionel went with Angelica aww haha, I loved it.
Vi is soo cute and Li totally knows he likes her, deep inside. it's just not the right time to acknowledge it hehe. but hmm Edwin Edwin.... what shall we do with you?
That's my birthday in a nutshell... not the snobby family but her desire to celebrate her birthday with ice cream movie and pjs. Keep up this intriguing story! I can't wait to see what happens. What is Edwin going to think?!