Fact of the Day - Comments

HAHAHAH OH MY GOSH HIS TEXT IN THE SUMMARY I AM DYINNG OVER HERE. But I don't even care that this is only at 2 chapters because I love it already.
Lionel is just such a cocky thing that it makes me like him all the more for some reason. And his way too blunt honesty is just hilarious
Him and Violet are just so opposite, but I feel like it works so well in the worst way -- I can just see them getting into petty little arguments or something cute like that.
Like I want to steal this idea and use it in real life though. Maybe I could make some friends too

Hahaha, wow. I have to admit I was really pulled in by the summary. It made me giggle a bit and I'm already intrigued by Lionel. Violet is also very interesting with her addiction to numbers. It seems that they will be very different.

This story is extremely intriguing and I'm really interested to see where you decide to go with it. The idea from what I can see is very creative and I haven't seen anything like it on Mibba. You write well, and the descriptions are pretty flawless. I was kind of laughing to myself as I read this because it was really cute. I like it. :)

Oh that Lionel! Honesty is always the best policy!
With every word I get more pumped on this story! I can't wait for more!

if you think about it then lionel was having sex at the end of the chapter?
I really liked the first chapter! Except I'm watching Teen Wolf as I read and I think I would rather watch Lionel

Really cute premise. :) I like it so far. Subscribing.

VILOET IS SUCH A PERFECTIONIST lol
she's so cute how she thought she was late
her boss seems very sweet ^___^
OH MY GOSH IT'S LIONEL
AND HE'S AT THE COFFEE PLACE OCSANKBOCSA oh yes heh
this is such a weird request LOL. very original though
this Lionel person seems very strange but idk yet
WHY DID THE NOTE COME FROM THE SKY ANWAY??!? HOW/???
i need more pls

This story makes me happy.

I've never really read anything like this. I really love the idea behind it, and it seems like the plot will be really interesting to watch develop.

The summary was great. I love Lionel's fact of the day, he seems so chill about telling some random stranger that he was having sex as he got her text.

I really like your writing style, too. The way you wrote Violet was perfect for the type of character she is, and I'm sure you'll write Lionel just as well. Your descriptions were simple but they worked really well with the chapters, and you’ve done a good job of beginning to develop your characters in this first chapter.

I’m excited to see where you go with this, well done!

I'm hooked! I need more. Lionel is a babe. I can't wait for his chapter!

Fact of the Day: I was having sex when I got your text.
OH MY GOD
PLEASE START THIS
I'M ALREADY HALF IN LOVE
seriously, he sounds ace. and it's probably gonna get really interesting, really fast!

WHY DID IT HAPPEN WHEN SHE GOT HIS TEXT OMG
i need to know asap pls c: