Let Love Unfold Your Legs - Comments

I REREAD THIS STORY BECAUSE I MISSED IT
I DUNNO IF YOU HAVE PLANS TO UPDATE
ALTHOUGH, I'D LOVE LOVE LOVE AN UPDATE

Oh please please please update. I am dying!!!!

I am BEGGING you to update this. I absolutely adore this story and I really want to find out what happens. I don't know if it is on hiatus or not but I am extremely cannot wait for the next chapter!

I always love the interaction between Nadine and Indie! It's so real and it fits the character's ages. You do this so well with a lot of your stories, as well. This chapter was sweet mainly because it's focused on their friendship, and most stories need this. Ugggh I can't wait for the next one!

more pls

Please update soon!

I love I love I love I looooove

I love how confident India became! It's like Simon is her little dose of it I really do enjoy your writing so I can't wait for more!!!

i love this

i love this

SimoN WHY DO YOU DO THIS ME
is he taking her shopping
damn i want them together more than India does

Thanks for updating! Love it <3

Girl......once again, you've captivated me with your flawless writing. I'm obsessed, not only with this story of course, but with you and your words and your mind. Just wow. This line: "I hope that he finds my nervousness endearing because I can’t help it and I would hate for him to hate something I can’t help." Omfg. Like...how do you think of these words? They're like someone squeezing my heart, your words make me feel everything dude. Maybe I'm being melodramatic, but I'm genuine. All I ask is, even if you don't have time to update this story anytime soon, PLEASE tell me you plan on continuing it. Pls! I love these characters so much.

love this!

Such short, but heavy with character, chapters! I absolutely love how in the first chapter I found out so much information about our home girl. You bring so much character and originality in your writing. Your writing is the type of writing people would try to compare themselves to in order to enhance or improve their own works. Your writing is flawless and seems so effortless. I truly marble at your creativity and the way you string your words together.

We wear the same uniform, but sometimes it doesn’t feel that way. I can relate to this so well it scares me. Hahahaha. Indie seems like the type of person, by the way she feels and thinks around Nadine, that no one really pays attention to but only when she does something out of her norm. Oh course, Nadine is somewhat of rule wreaker….I love it haha. Now we all have Nadine to thank for some Simon and Indie action HAHAHA.

I can’t get over how well written this is. I adore this and your writing so much. But I think I’ve said that way to often already ahaha.

India’s personality reaches me on so many level oh my. I feel for her because she’s always the underdog and doesn’t give herself credit. :-(

I’VE TAKEN SOMEONE’S DRINK BEFORE AT SB W/O EVEN NOTICING IT HAHAHHAHA

The way you’ve written about Simon looking at India at this cafe made me actually think he was staring at me HAHAHHAHAHAH THIS IS SO GOOD

Peppermint guy and Simon??????? The choice is all yours India, all yours. I had to reread the first chapter again because I remember reading about the scent of peppermints then this chapter happened and well IM EXCITED TO READ WHERE THIS WILL NOW GO ooOooooh

DuUUUuuude, her mom is scary and frightening and damn. I feel for India :-((((

I’ve been staring at the pictures on the layout for a while now that the girl is starting to look like someone I went to school with HAHHAHAHA

GIRL, STAND UP FOR YOURSELF. SAY YOUR THOUGHTS. MAKE YOUR VOICE BE HEARD. I needed to say that.

Simon’s smooth. He’s smooth with his words. HE MAKES HER FEEL LIKE THE WORLD IS HER’S (oh cheesy dear)

Nadine may seem like a self centered person but I honestly love her. She seems so real like any other person. Even though it seems she loves her appearance a little too much, it’s probably the only thing she has, you know (on a deeper scale)? I haven’t read much about her yet (as I’m still on Part 8) but Nadine is lovely. I can’t wait to read more about her character and her story.

INDIA’S THOUGHTS ARE MAGICALLY. All real, real, real

Peppermint guy is interesting. Very demanding and forward. Never said it was a bad thing….hahah HIS REACTION WHEN SHE TOLD HIM SHE WAS 17 AHHAHAHAHAHAAHA OH

I love how India acts when she was talking to Simon on the phone. She doesn’t sugar coat it. It’s all natural. Your writing is so natural, and an easy read!

Her mom is full of wisdom, that India doesn’t even know it yet. From her mother’s past mistakes, I assume she’s only doing these things to benefit for India’s future. She’s not the greatest mother yeah, but it’s real and there.

LOUBOUTINS
louboutins
SHE GOTS THOSE HEELS
DEAR
those are heel goals

Nadine needs the power. Maybe, like said before, that’s all she’s got?

PEPPERMINT GUY IS BACK AGAIN O

SIMON OWNS A COMPANY. OH OKAY

That last line in Part 14 is getting to me on so many levels. I’m hooked on this, I love your writing, I love Simon and India.

The intern and the boss. A classic. I LOVE IT.

Simon’s forward. Knows what he wants. OKAY OKAY OKAY I can’t handle this. SHE GAVE IT BACK TO HIM. she was all like “he’s not you, simon.” SHE’S GAINING HER STRENGTH YAYAYA.

Since you made that first author’s note about 50sog, I can’t stop picturing Simon as Jamie Dornan HAHAH

…my lips are a snowflake on the tip of his nose that’s he’s just brushing away <- THIS HIT ME ///so good with words

I’m waiting on the day when I see why India presently hates Simon. LOVED THE HOUR I SPENT READING THIS. I am sincerely asking for another update (-:

My comment is ridiculously long. I’m sorry for making you read my thoughts for a longer than appropriate time hahahaha. I just couldn’t contain my thoughts on this beauty.

Ugh, I am simply in love with this story, especially with the name India. It's so, so beautiful. This whole thing is excellent, as a matter of fact.

I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS.

I love it; just continue.

OH MY GOODNESS THE ANTICIPATION IS TOO MUCH
YOU ARE KILLING EVERYONE HERE
also, jeez, Nadine is such a bitch

Oh Gosh, Simonnnnn