Although I like the layout, I think the gray text overlapping the gray picture is a bit odd. Parts of the story I couldn't read because of this and highlighted it so I could. I'd fix that :).
Despite this fact, you have an amazing story going here. You have superb grammar and I love that your sentences flow greatly. I also like how you described her occupation without saying "I'm a stripper my mom was a stripper." You used more descriptive words than that and I love you for that haha :D! I think this is a great idea, even though it seems a bit sad because of her dead mother and obscure occupation, but I know you'll be able to take it to any amazing place you want to :)!
Despite this fact, you have an amazing story going here. You have superb grammar and I love that your sentences flow greatly. I also like how you described her occupation without saying "I'm a stripper my mom was a stripper." You used more descriptive words than that and I love you for that haha :D! I think this is a great idea, even though it seems a bit sad because of her dead mother and obscure occupation, but I know you'll be able to take it to any amazing place you want to :)!