Silence Says - Comments

@ luck_dragon
Maybe just.. Hmm. Well, my idea is why not put the uncensored version up here, and just 'fade to black' on the other site, with the link to the uncensored version if the readers wish to read the whole thing?

@ stunning.reality;
That might be the wiser choice, yeah. I want to make sure the younger readers are all comfortable with that, though. There's also the issue that another site I post on just straight up doesn't allow adult content, so idk what to do about that. Have naked time here and make a censored version for the other site? Put some dicks in over there and hope I don't get reported/scar some poor kid for life?

I think that it'd almost be best to up the rating now, and plan ahead so it's not all of a sudden *TA DAAAA NEW RATING WHOOO*, and deters some readers (I think). I've seen and read some stories that have a rating of R, but the explicit content, per say, is only once in a while. It's all up to you, in the end. (:

@ RasberrySuicide!!
Thanks! I hope you enjoy what I've got coming up.

So far this story is extremely good :3 I'll definatly subscribe

@ luck_dragon
:D

@ fiction246
Oh yeah, I know what flying foxes are! I might do that at some point.

@ luck_dragon
Haha no worries!! I don't know...ignore the swing things. Haha maybe it was more of a flying fox thing I was thinking of. (Just had to ask my family what that was called lol) looking forward to more :)

@ fiction246
Thanks for the ideas! I have plans for canoeing :D The chapter I'm working on has rock climbing BUT THEY'RE NOT REAL ROCKS. Hiking is a good idea! I'll probably include that at some point. I'd love to do a scavenger hunt because I think Toby would be quite good at it, but I'm not sure if I could come up with good clues. I can barely remember the only scavenger hunt I ever took part in... I'm not sure what you mean by 'big swing things' and neither was google images.

I like that Noah seems sweet. He just needs to break down Toby's walls a bit. And poor Toby!!! And camp activities - canoeing, hiking, rock climbing, scavenger hunt, those big swing things..don't know what they are called :P um I don't know I can't think of anything else. Haha

@ Kacen Shea
Thank you! I have an interest in psychology and a few personal experiences that I'm kind of combining with more common themes and tropes. So far it's been interesting. I am definitely continuing it. I'm already over 1000 words into the next chapter.

Only two chapters in and I'm really liking this idea. It has some things going on in it that are not the normal, over-used things you often find on here. I hope you continue this, subscribing.

@ therevsbartendingjeh
Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. I don't know about published work. I'm just happy some people like it!

I actually like this a lot! I hardly ever find stories that are like this on here. It's very different. Also, I could totally see this as a published work. I've read books that have had less talent put in them, and I've gotta say..it flows smoothly too, and I read the entire thing instead of just skim through. =] Good job!

@ luck_dragon
haha i know lol Im just weird great story tho :P

@ EmzyStilinski
I'm not sure you'd quite meet his tastes, but at least he wouldn't squark, flail, and go into meltdown like Toby would if you did the same to him.

@ stunning.reality;
he seems cute i WANT TO LICK HIS FACE XD He'd sooo enjoy it lol

@ luck_dragon
You just made my life. Omfg. My. Life.
So. I'm gonna message you instead.
And then sleep.
With my stackable cats.

@ EmzyStilinski
Woah man.
Wait a minute.
Lick his face?
I don't think he'd like that. XD

ooo if she gets Toby can I take Noah and lick his face