Flourish - Comments

@ TheShiningSoul
I'm working on the sequel soon :) So should be posted not too long away :)
Aww thanks! xx

Is there a sequel? And if so, what's it called? :D I really can't get enough of this xxxx

@ Rockabella
Ah yeah, well that's understandable :) it really is great though and you're welcome xxx

@ TheShiningSoul
I wrote it for a comp so I was concerned on getting it finished and not grammar, I need to go back through and fix it! :)
Thanks so much!! xx

I've read so much already and I only started reading about 40 minutes ago, but this story is so mesmerizing! I just can't help but love it :D I actually do ship Alian (Alice and Ryan) even though there are reasons as to why it could be seen as wrong. Those reasons being fairly obvious, but that's really good, because it makes the story really intriguing! All I could advice is that some of the grammar seems to be a bit off, but that doesn't excuse this from being a wonderful story! I just love it so much. Excellent...xxx

@ Pieces.Of.Heaven.
All will be answered in the sequel :)

@ darkaly
I will be starting the sequel soon don't worry!! :)

ahhhhsdagfvh, I feel like I need the sequel now

I have this horrible need to hope, but id rather just hide in the corner because I just KNOW this isnt going to end well. I cant see her mother accepting this, not even a little....

@ darkaly
The next update will be the last chapter - But a sequel will be written :P
I loved the picture so I had to use it :)

Awh, I can't wait for the next update, and I'm happy that you got to use that photo!

@ angelofdeath321
Thank you so much :)

This is beautiful, please update soon, you are a wonderful and talented writer :)

@ pjfunnbunny
Aww thankyou :)

Really love this story! Can't wait for the update!

She wants to overcome it, yay :-)

I hope she can overcome her abuse, she deserves to be happy with someone who wants to make her happy (like Ryan!)

@ darkaly
It was a really hard scene to write, I hope it conveyed the message of the connection Bambi and her uncle share.

Ah that little memory no hagrfgfgnk

That was an interesting encounter with Karla. She was wise for someone of her age.