I can't believe she just left, well actually I can, but still. Poor Pat, I hope he doesn't do anything stupid now that she's left. I'm nervous he's gonna like go sleep around to deal with Allie's rejection or to try and forget about her. Allie has to be there for his day with the cup, she just has to! She better not have gone back to Chicago, if so then Pat needs to go and drag her back to Buffalo with him.
Aww poor Pat! I can't believe she left! I'm wondering what was going through her head, though I'm sure it was a ton of crazy emotions. Everything seems to be happening so quickly in her life from Eric to Grant and now on to Pat, I'm sure it's confusing for her. Hopefully whatever is going on with her that made her run away, she'll be able to explain it to Pat, because he definitely deserves an explanation!
And I wonder how this is going to affect Pat, I can see it going one of two ways. He's either going to get really depressed and sad again since she's out of his life (temporarily I hope!) or he's going to go back to his old habits and sleep around to get her off of his mind. Either way, I can't wait to see where you go with this!
Oh my god nooooooooo! He was ready! He wanted her so badly! More than just sex! And she knows she wants it too! She can't be scared! Please update again soon!
So I just read this whole story in the past two days, and I have to tell you how much I have thoroughly enjoyed it. It's been a long while since a story has really captured my attention and held it, and this one definitely has!
So many thoughts and emotions have gone through my head while reading this all the way through. The way you write is really outstanding. So many details in there that make it so perfect. And I like that we get both Pat and Allie's POVs.
I wasn't really sure how to feel about Grant at the beginning. Like he seemed like such a nice guy, but obviously I was rooting for Pat to be with Allie, so it was hard for me to like him haha. So you can imagine how happy I was when the two of them broke up!
And Pat, oh how he messed up majorly, calling her names (even if he was drunk) and then not talking to her for two weeks. But, I'm glad he could see how important she is in his life and that he wouldn't give up until she finally talked to him again. I really do like their relationship and how they interact with each other. It's more than just a friendship, and you can see how they've stayed friends for so long.
And I'm sooooo happy that he finally made a move and she obviously welcomed it. It'll be interesting to see how this changes their relationship though, and if either of them want to go back to being just friends or now that they've had sex it'll change their friendship forever. And especially since Allie just got out of another relationship!
I can't wait to read more! Keep up the excellent story :)
So excited and happy that I found this story and about time these two got together!! Holy smoke show and hotness!! I cannot wait for the next chapter. Loving this❤️ And I really hope that this is it for them that they realize what they've been looking for was right in front of them and that after all this she realize that she's in love with Patrick like he's in love with her !!
OH MY HOD THAT WAS AMAZING! Finally!!! I hope that they're okay in the morning. And I hope he finally realizes he is inlove with her and I hope she realizes it's always been him. Please update again soon!
Change of plans. There will not be an update tonight. I ended up at my grandparents' house way later than I expected and was unable to finish the chapter. I've been writing it on my phone, so I'll finish it tonight and transfer it to my computer in the morning. It'll be up by morning or mid-day at the latest. Thank you all for being so patient with me and I promise you won't regret it :)
@ DiamondGirl827 Definitely will have an update before Christmas. Ahhhh, I can't wait to give you guys this next chapter! It'll be up within the next day or two.