I really can't wait to see how you end this story (obviously I really hope pat and ali get together!). I love how charming he is and how giddy she gets, its really very cute to read :) Especially now that she's seeing Pat in a different way... Can't wait for more updates! :)
My heart was practically beating out of my chest through this chapter. She's starting to notice that what was wrong with her perfect relationships was that they weren't with Patrick. She knows that they're meant to be together! Please update again soon! I can't wait to see what Patrick has planned and I hope it makes Allie realize exactly what she wants with Patrick. And I hope that happens for him too. I think it's time he spoke out :]
So since sometimes you update within hours of me commenting asking for an update I'm gonna try and work some voodoo magic again this time. Hopefully it will work and you'll update soon!
I read this story as fast as I could. I love it so much! Is it bad to say I'm glad Grant is out of the picture? lol :P I didn't like him from the beginning! The whole situation with Eric was very well written. I thought he was abusive or a stalker or something, but he's quite the opposite. I also love how you portray Patrick. He and Allie have the most adorable relationship and I hope it goes further... Keep up the amazing work and I cannot wait for the next update!
Glad you broke through your writer's block! Loved the update! Patrick seems so close to realizing his feelings he just needs someone or thing to give him that last little push. The flashback scene was great!
Omg I loved this chapter! So cute! I love how the roles were reversed haha. And hopefully she will get some funny business. They love each other and always have.