Skinny Love - Comments

I really like this - it's simple yet deep. It's beautifully written, with just the right amount of information, and it definitely holds the readers' attention. Great job and keep writing!

Hello!
I love this story, as it is very beautiful in it's own special way. .
I can just feel the fact that it's going to develop into something marvelous, by the way it is going now . .
I honestly can say that I haven't read that many works that are like this. I love your writing, and the quotes that you leave
in the 'author's note' section. Also, the similes, and metaphors are quite . . what's the word? yes, bewitching!

Keep on writing. .

~ Verona :)

Wow, this story is absolutely beautiful. I have no words after reading it. I was really intrigued by the idea of basing it off of Bon Iver songs, as I love his music and I think you are pulling it off amazingly.

I love the writing style you're writing this in. I have always been a fan of the short chaptered drabble-like story, and I'm writing two myself. This one is absolutely flawless and I only wish mine could be that good.

You have the characterization down perfectly with this story. You write up the characters so well in such small chapters. I don't know how you do it, but this is gorgeous.

Probably the best story I have read in a long time.

Ugh, this is so perfect. I adore Bon Iver, and the fact that you wrote a story based on his songs is fantastic.

I really love how you wrote this. Your writing style fits in with the short drabble-like chapters so well, and I love how you have a bit of a pattern going on in the chapters, with the italicized last sentence and Bon Iver lyrics in the author’s note. For some reason, that made everything feel like it flowed really well.

Your characters are really interesting as well. You’ve developed them well do far and I’m excited to see what you do with them.

Amazing job!

Why is everything of yours so perfect?

I adore everything about this. I fell in love with the song almost a year ago and still love it, you've portrayed it in ways that are unimaginable, I'm beyond words right now. You are so, so gifted.

God Bless!!

xoxo

Olivia

Everything is perfect. Everything is beautiful. Keep it up, because I'm intrigued and need to read more.