I really love this story!! I was waiting for Brian to kiss her in the bushes lol!! I really hope you continue in and update soon!! I can wait to see how this all develops more!
brian seems like a real cutie! love the whole thing with him not comfortable with talking about what he feels and stuff.. and totally get why he's upset with jimmy and weed.. really liked Donna's POV- think it'd be fun if you keep changing POV's between the two girls now and then AND hide and seek in the park- yeap funnier than rock-paper-scissors
Filler chapter I'm assuming but it was dandy (: I'm bery interested to see if donna tries weed with ol jimbo, wonder what brian would think of her then... :o anyways, so beer is involved in the next chapter, interesting, hoping big mama bitch dosnt find out!
OMG I'm SO EXCITED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER WITH DONNA IN IT! Courtney obviously wants matts dick well i think that was said jn the previous chapter so thats ironic heeheehee
OMG I'm SO EXCITED TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER WITH DONNA IN IT! Courtney obviously wants matts dick well i think that was said jn the previous chapter so thats ironic heeheehee
aawe she's not homesick anymore thanks to matt and the guys oh what a tease he is!! and poor johnny- always made fun of
-about the comments, I think that might be half impossible to get.. like a year ago you could get tons of comments on the chapters of your stories but now you'd kinda be happy if you get 5.. dunno if ppl just can't be bothered to stop for a sec and leave a comment on what they thought.. :/
OMG I'm SO EXCITED FOR THIS MEXT UPDATE! I cant wait to see what yhe girls and the guys do, personally i bieve donna and brian should fuck, but thats just me. Anyways, update soon!
hahaha when you wrote that her mothers name was suzy i totally thought that she'd be brians stepmother i wouldn't be nice to that woman either if i were courtney.. can't wait to read more- now that they've met the guys