Lightning in a Bottle - Comments

Oh man. Sandra you never cease to amaze me with your chapters. I can't wait to see the surprise wedding and I completely agree with the comment about a fourth installment of this story!:D

@ settheworldonfire
lol i don't think i can do a full 4th story.
BUT there will be future ficlets! i already have 3 of them planned out in my head! so, it's not like... completely over yet

So... Who reckons we can heckle a fourth installment out of this;)

@ dancerlittle
why thank you! i can't wait for you to read it!

Awwwww a surprise wedding!!!! I love it!! Can't wait to see what the surprise wedding entails! Awesome job!

@ airplanes__
omg i'm SO excited to write the next part. i've been so excited for it

iii KNEW IT! As soon as the girls were gossiping at the beginning of the chapter, I knew that was what they had up their sleeves! Can't wait to see it unfold :)

@ Caitlynnnn
i knoooooow! but the last chapter it the last chapter and there's a lot to put into it and my brain is just like "i don't want to deal with it!" but soon i promise

It's been foreverrrrrrrr. Please update! I miss them so much

@ brunettecutie04
yeah thats true!

@ sandrashameless
Oh goodness no! I like the way you've written it and how you've gone about the entire story! I wouldn't let you change anything! It's too good to go back and retouch! Honestly. Not just saying that. Plus, you can always add in more info for everyone with more chapters or another story for them? Haha :D

@ brunettecutie04
i want to go back and rewrite it sometimes. make changes and make it better. but eh, who has the time?

Haha, If it were up to me I would make you write story after story for these two, so I wouldn't have to see them go. They're my favourite. Okay, so we still have a few left! :) Thank you!

@ brunettecutie04
yeah i'm sad to end this story too. Ayden and Niall are my OTP!
but i'm for sure doing like... 2 ficlets after i end this so there's for sure like 3 or 4 more chapters of this (well 2 official ones i think idk anymore haha)
and merry christmas to you too!

Okay, this story is absolutely adorable. Seriously. I've been reading all the chapters I've missed and writing what I thought about them then submitting them after I've finished. Niall is adorable and so is Ayden. You know I ADORE these two. I'm so happy that kids may be a thing for the future. Every line is awesome. I completely am on board with the whole series of one-shots for the story. I can't wait until you add your next chapter :D Merry Christmas!! I'm writing that on all the stories I read, lol. It sucks that there is only 2 chapters left but the one-shots will help!!!!

@ theepretendpenelope
yeah i like the idea of little ficlets. like, it's my way of keeping them alive. Ayden and Niall are my fav! i'm glad you enjoy my stories!

Little ficlets, yes, please! Reading them every now and then when inspiration strikes would be nice(: I love this! I'll be sad to see it go, but your other stories are still around, so all's well, ahah.

@ dancerlittle
i'm glad you liked it! i like to think that Denise is a little sassy lol
idk i've been debating if i should like end it, like tie everything up, but have little one-shots here and there into their lives from past present and future. like have a chapter about how they first met, and a random chapters about random moments and future stuff. but idk we'll see how i end this!

Awwwwww I love it!!! Love that Niall is slowly convincing her having kids will be all right. I love who you write Denise. Denise's comment cracked me up!! Brilliant job! Sad to see this story go. Will you be writing more Ayden and Niall? Awesome chapter!!!

Awwwwww I love it!!! I love Niall surprising her early. Love the chapter!!!