Lightning in a Bottle - Comments

Awwwwww I love it!!! I love Niall surprising her early. Love the chapter!!!

@ airplanes__
Ayden and Niall are endgame. this i can promise!

woot woot! I'm glad things are working out.

@ dancerlittle
it's good! i really enjoy it!
yeah i like to think that the voice of reason would flip flop in certain situations you know

How's the job going??? Awesome job with the chapter. I love how Ayden assured Niall that everything was fine between them and in the end it was flipped so that Niall was the reassuring one. Absolutely loved the chapter!!!

@ brunettecutie04
idk what i'm doing with next chapter lol
my job is awesome so far! thanks!

LMAO, Kota saying "Want to borrow Harry's" literally made me laugh out loud. No, I completely agree with you. He wasn't too sobby he was perfect. Honestly, I would expect him to grovel like that because he really did screw it up - badly. Ayden going back to him is because she loves him so much. They're both in it so deep. I loved the chapter. It was great. Can't wait for the next one! Hope you're jobs going well!!

@ pattycake
i had the same thought as i was writing it, but i mean, maybe Niall thought he had to bottle it up because he didn't want her to get mad and leave herself. he was in kind of a dark place.
congrats on getting a job too!

I am actually okay with the groveling, nothing to worry about there! I just find it hard to believe that Niall is the type of person to bottle up his feelings. But the way I see it, if that is the only issue, I can suck it up. Thanks for the update, and congrats on the job, I also just got hired and I know how exciting it can be! :)

@ dancerlittle
thank you! i was worried it came off too... like... idk? but i really liked it the more i tweaked it. i'm glad you liked it! and thanks, i can't wait to start this job!

Awwww good luck at your first day tomorrow. Second awesome job with the chapter!! I think it was perfect that Niall was this sobby guy. He knew he f-ed up and he knew he potentially lost her forever. Awesome job!!

First off, yay you got the job!! Second, great chapter as always. It's completely understandable for Adyen to be upset at him and be hiding. I love that Liam came to talk to her and that Blue flew out to see her - I would do the same thing.
She should go and have Niall have it - but at the end of they day they are meant to be, as Dani pointed out. She needs to tell him that he can't decide everything for her. They both love each other and things will be smooth soon...they just need to talk.

@ airplanes__
i can't wait to see what she says either, because i have no idea what to do at this point lol

“Oh sure, I come over here to talk to you and all I get is you hiding under the covers,” Liam scoffed from behind me.

I actually LOL-ed at that hahahah loveddd ittt but its so upsetting that Niall keeps doing this to her! I can't wait to see what she says to him!

@ sylvia wrath
i'm going to TRY and have it out monday, but i can't promise anything

YOU NEED TO WRITE THEIR CONVERSATION AND WRITE IT NOW
I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL TUESDAY

YAY!!!! I'm glad Liam and Blue got her out of bed. I really hope she lays into Niall because he deserves it. Awesome job!!!

@ SameeAllStar
hopefully tomorrow!

Please update this soon!!! The story is just getting good!!! :D

@ We'll Be A Dream ;;
i'm sorry! lol