WHAT?! IORJLJ I'm all....jello right now lol. Mmmm. You make him so sound sick and so hot! That kiss...omfg.... Someone ring the alarm cause there's a fire in my panties bahahaha.
Holy hell damn is it wrong I was like, "she'sgettingnakedshe'sgettingnakedTHEY'RETOGETHERandSHE'SGETTINGNAKED!"
HOLY SHIT THO, OMG. he KISSED HER. OMG NICOLE WHAT IS THIS. OMG POST AGAIN, UPDATE, GIRL WHAT?? GOGO!
I do likey the missing person clip you're so talented.
I think one thing I love so much about this story is the fact that you use such unique and different words to describe things and just how you word every chapter, how it flows so effortlessly just makes me so happy. I'm so proud of you, sissy. You're such an amazing writer, I REALLY need to know what's gonna happen with em. <333
lol sigh. I need new ovaries and I'm not sure why! There was no actual sex. It was still good and didn't need sex to be hot! He sounds so sexy. Why are psychos so hot?
Oh my GOD! Effffff Nicole why do I like this guy? Fuuuuuuuuuu stop writing so fantastically. Goooodddddd. Update gurl, update. I'll make the next comment better i just needa fangirl
Gosh, this is really unlike a lot of the stories I read on here on a daily basis and I love it! It really is so twisted and unusual. Like psychotic secrets; said, coming across a Stockholm Syndrome-esque story where the victim willingly goes with their captor is a really unusual and strange idea to think about and it honestly isn't one I've ever read about. I couldn't possibly imagine willingly wanting to leave my family and go with a complete stranger that had just kidnappedme, so it's really interesting to read about Kelly and her thoughts because it's a mindset that I'm totally not used to so it really intrigues me.
In a weird way, I hope that Kelly and her captor do get really romantic together. It's just the way that Kelly said that he was the only one that liked her, that really got me. I don't know, they just seem altogether perfectly suited, as warped and weird as that sounds.
I'm really excited to see how you deal with Kelly's relationship with her captor and the rest of the plot in general. It's really refreshing to read something so unique and gripping. Good job!
Oh dear God I ship it already. Poor poor Kelly, but oh my God this story has me hooked. Please update as soon as you can! The details are just marvelous, and the main character is so..I don't know neutral and at some points manic, but I just love her.
BTW I was in the shower thinkin' bout this story, so awk and I was also listening to moosic what the fuck, where am i going with this? but what i wanted to say was that the song The Reeling by Passion Pit totally reminded me of Kelly. Like totally. idk if you'll feel it but anyways. Fuckin' I love this. To death. And i'm gonna update Wallaby Way, Sydney, so soon. YOU HAVE NO IDEA. I'M SO EXCITED AND THIS IS SO INSPIRING. <333
I LOVE YOU SISTA, KEEP UP THIS BEAUTIFUL can i say that about gore? unf who cares AMAZING WRITING, YOU ARE PERFECT.
Holy Balls! I am blown away. Before...I had only read the first chapter but now I've sat here and read all of them up until your update you just did. I LOVE this story! I really do....
I'm picky when it comes to actually buying books because a lot of them never have ...spark...or that real...."out there uniqueness" but this story right here.....I would buy this if it were a book based on what I've read so far.
I'm not just saying that to be nice....I mean it! I really love this story. Please....write more soon!
Dear goodness! I'm so glad I stumbled onto this. You have NO idea how refreshing it is to find something different for once and find an author who thinks outside of the typical genre box. I loved the story from just reading the summary.