May 14th, 2008 at 01:11pm
Actions Speak Louder Than Words - Comments
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I really really like this - continue, please!!!!!!!!May 12th, 2008 at 09:55pm
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Ooh!
Interesting plot!
hehe!
I don't like that teacher!
Update Spoon!May 12th, 2008 at 05:38am -
Awww, this was a sweet chapter. Sorry I don't really have anything else to say but... yeah. I'm not at my house so I haven't read the whole thing properly.
What a dumb teacher, though. Thank god Frank was there to save the day for Mikey. ^__^ And he was also kind of sweet for him. And it's cute that they can sign to each other without anyone else knowing. But I'm curious as to how Frank knows how. Hmmmmm.
Good chapter, your spelling is great and so is your grammar. Don't come by these kinds of stories too often. x]
I'm defninitely excited for the next update. ;DMay 11th, 2008 at 10:46pm -
i've never read a story with this kind of idea and i must say steph, im hooked lol
i really love it!! :DMay 11th, 2008 at 08:04pm -
Frikeys have always been my favorite (:
I love this soooo much!
It's so origional,
It's an awesome story line.
UPDATE SOON PLEASE (:May 11th, 2008 at 07:40pm -
aww cute! i <3 frankie! too adorable!May 11th, 2008 at 06:06pm
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lovely frikeyMay 11th, 2008 at 05:43pm
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wow, this story is absolutely amazing! i love the plot so far, i can't wait to find out what happened to mikey...and i love how bob's like his 'protector'...hopefully bob won't keep frank away from mikey, thinking he's someone who's going to hurt him...
i think you're doing an amazing job so far! can't wait for more!May 11th, 2008 at 04:01pm -
very intriguing
i quite like it
=DMay 11th, 2008 at 02:51pm -
Thank you for pointing it out. There's still a message thingy saying one of my stories is not meeting guidelines but I don't know which one it is.
Anyway thank you for all the feedback, I should have a new one up soon. Thank you to all readers, commenters, and subscribersMay 11th, 2008 at 01:08pm -
Feedback. I like it. You've got at least three mistakes, though. Paragraph four: "gabbed" instead of "grabbed"; paragraph seven - "was" instead of "were"; paragraph eight - first sentence needs a comma. There may be more (and that last one may be off because I forgot to write it down), but that's all I remember. Other than that, it's great. I'm subscribing.May 11th, 2008 at 06:27am
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I really like this one too!
It's cute in a way.
*subscribes*
Can't wait to find out what happened to Mikey.
UPDATE SOON PLEASE :]May 11th, 2008 at 01:43am -
More! :D haha, love the idea :]May 10th, 2008 at 07:38pm
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This plot is awesomeness.
At first I was kind of like, "Wtf?" And then I read about living in a home. It was kind of a gasp-shocker, and then an "Awwww." I feel really bad for Mikey now. I can just picture him being all quiet. ._. But at least he has Bob.
^__^ Other than that, I don't think I spotted any typos or grammatical errors or stuff like that. It's a really good story! I'm going to subscribe. :]May 10th, 2008 at 04:22pm -
Ohh please update :cry:May 10th, 2008 at 04:21pm
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i love the idea =)
what happened to Mikey?
*suscribes*
more soon, please? :DMay 10th, 2008 at 03:56pm
i like this a lot.
more?