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  • kipderder

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    @ bobbylou
    Thanks so much for the lovely comment! It's always nice to see and hear from new readers. Welcome to the madness, lots more to come! Mr. Green
    July 11th, 2017 at 05:42pm
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    Absolutly in love with this story!! I must admit i've never been what id call a fan of tom or chris, i enjoyed them oposite eachother in the avengers univers but never paid them much mind, having said that, now i absolutly love them! Your writing is amazing and extremely detailed, and not one bit of it seemed rushed or imature like other stories!! Absolutly adore your story and cant wait for more!! Xx
    July 11th, 2017 at 03:31pm
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    God dammit Layla, get out of the closet and help out your daughter!! Mitch just makes me soooo angry! He's such a creep! And there's no way Aubrey can back track if she goes to dinner with him even once, and then how would she explain that to Tom and Chris? Agghh!!!
    July 10th, 2017 at 08:23pm
  • kipderder

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    @ A7XLizardQueen
    LOL, Aubrey thanks you for the warning. BTW, only her dad is southern. Her mom is a California girl, born and raised in Newport Beach. I was originally going to have her mother come to the door, but I scrapped that idea. Let's just say she got lost in Aubrey's enormous closet trying to find gym clothes. And the Hiddleston's house is pretty big, so Aubrey would've had to scream bloody murder for her mom to hear her all the way in the back where the master bedroom is located.

    Thanks for commenting! Mr. Green
    July 8th, 2017 at 07:13pm
  • A7XLizardQueen

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    Do not go to dinner with him Aubrey!!!!

    Also, I'm just wondering what kind of southern mother Aubrey's mom is that she didn't go investigating. I feel like she was gone WAY too long and she clearly gave a yelp of distress at one point. I'm not southern but if my mother was visiting me and someone kept me at the door that long my mom would come and see who it was, especially to find out why I didn't invite them in.
    July 8th, 2017 at 01:03am
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    @ thor is bae
    Thanks :)
    July 6th, 2017 at 11:01pm
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    @ fiction246
    OMG, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! Hug
    July 6th, 2017 at 04:21pm
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    Erg, Mitch is horrible!!!! I was hoping that her dad would show up and sort him out but no such luck :( I don't see how she has any choice but to go out to dinner with him. If he can cause all of that bad stuff to happen to her family :( looking forward to seeing what happens next!!! Her and Chris need to get it on. And Tom needs to come home <3

    Thanks for the great read on my birthday ;)
    July 6th, 2017 at 12:46pm
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    I actually got grossed out when Mitch attacked her with his slimey criminal mouth. I don't think I have ever despised a character this much in my life. my stomach turned and I had to stop reading. I honestly skipped over the whole scene because I picture everything described in my mind and it made me so sick that I just couldn't read it without my stomach turning. I guess that just tells you how good of a job you did haha
    July 6th, 2017 at 09:59am
  • Dezi Demize

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    She also needs to tell Tom and Chris about Mitch!!!
    July 6th, 2017 at 05:14am
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    I think Mitch is bluffing. I also think Aubrey needs to file a restraining order ASAP!!!!
    July 6th, 2017 at 05:14am
  • AliMeansWings

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    Oh. My. Jesus. Mitch is terrifying! But you know I love it! I thin she has no choice but to go to dinner with him. And, I know it's awful, but the mention of "dubious consent" has me all hot and bothered. I wonder if she'll tell the boys.
    July 5th, 2017 at 03:29pm
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    Well shit. I'm all kinds of hot and bothered from that phone conversation, but it was a nice relief from this frustrating I got gong on: I'M LITRALLY DYING WAITING FOUR CHRIS AND AUBREY TO FINALLY HUMP EACH OTHER. Please tell me you're gonna put me out of my misery soon. I'm super period that Aubrey stood up to her dad: I get where he's coming from but he's being too much! That cliffhanger though! If that's who I think it is showing up, I can only hope he's in for a world of hurt with Aubrey 's dad there!
    May 29th, 2017 at 04:18pm
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    "She was in sheer agony, and at this stage in the game, waiting wasn’t merely torture. It had transitioned to the more effective task of killing her."

    I thought I'd quote a part of this and change it a bit to describe how I feel about these sex waits. Im actually crying right now lmfao this was a great chapter, as usual. I really can't wait for the next chapter.

    Enters Van Tassell. Rain clouds folllow. Once vibrant flowers turn into ash as he passes by lmfao
    May 13th, 2017 at 10:32am
  • fiction246

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    Omg that was amazing!!!! Damn!!!! Phone sex with Chris when her parents could have walked by!! I love it. And I bet that Mr Van Tassell is at the door. Maybe Forrest can come and teach him a lesson for stalking his daughter. Can't wait to see what happens next. Tom needs to come home, he has been away too long!!! <3
    May 12th, 2017 at 11:44pm
  • A7XLizardQueen

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    Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 12th, 2017 at 04:00pm
  • AliMeansWings

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    This was EXACTLY what I needed! So glad you haven't fallen off the face of the earth. The phone sex was so hot and I'm *this* close to reaching through this fic and smacking Forrest in his face. Ugh. Talk about a protective papa! I loved every line of it, though! And I can't wait to see what happens with this stalker.
    May 12th, 2017 at 01:51pm
  • RiverAsphodel92

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    Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
    So happy you made a new chapter! I've been for a full hour and it's like almost 4 in the morning. Check my email and noticed you updated the story and I got too excited. It's been forever but worth the wait. Lol. Forrest has nothing but good intentions for his daughter but he's a bit a pain in the ass. I love how Layla is so supportive and is basically match made in heaven for Forrest. Now with Aubrey and Chris...they need to get a hotel room. The sexual tension is too much to tolerate at this point lol. And of course I'm pretty sure that was Mitch Van Tassel that left an unbearable cliffhanger of the newest chapter. Though we don't know much about the guy yet he reminds me of Jack Hyde from Fifty Shades Darker. He kinda does. Wanting someone he knows can never have. Same goes for Jocelyn and to be honest I can't wait to see how that pans out with her and Mitch. Devious people like these two are made for each other.
    May 12th, 2017 at 09:27am
  • xxoomwauhzxxoo

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    Please update! Please!
    May 3rd, 2017 at 05:14am
  • Golden

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    I came back to reread and just now realizing my name was in the statues and that just made my day omg. I feel like I won an Oscar <333333
    April 22nd, 2017 at 07:29pm