The Fear of Falling Apart - Comments

@ megeddie
I'm sorry I haven't updated this in a while... I've been going through a lot of person things and it's really affected my time. I really want to update this soon, and I'm going to try to. Thanks for taking the time to read it. I really appreciate it. <3

Pwease update I love this :) xx

I love this, holy smokes!!! I love that Patrick is surprisingly aggressive and this bad side of him is falling in love with Katie. Love it!

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

Can't wait for the Alexis drama! Update soon!

Ahhh great!! and omg Alexis is coming?! Its about to go down!!

@ marina2351
Thank you so much for your comment! I can't even express how much it means to me. I've been writing my ass off lately... can't wait to show everything what's coming!

@ Burn_The_Ashes
awe I'm so glad! Thank you so much for you comment! <33

Oh wow this story is literally my favourite ever ugh it's amazing.

In love with this.

Aww that was sweet

@ minorasmith
Thank you for your honesty! I know there's a lot I still need to work on. (That's why it's says rough draft) lol Thank you for reading! I will be updating this soon and I hope you continue to enjoy it <3

Ahh I reallly like this!! Ill be honest, i wasnt too sure at first, but I LOVE it!!! Keep it up!!

@ AClockworkLove
Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! I appreciate your feedback. I'm going to work on developing more of the story so it's easier to follow. This is definitely a rough draft on my part so I plan on revising a lot of it in the near future. Again, thank you so much for reading!

I really actually enjoy this story. The words and the way you set up your sentences are great! I just feel like the story is rushed, and a lot of the characterization is supposed to come from assumption. Other than that, keep up the good work. :) Looking forward to reading.

@ ImpracticalJoker13
oh I'm completely aware that it's by elton john hun. I just love her version for the sake of the scene. :) Thank you for your comment! I'm really glad you liked it. <3

Loved that she played Elton John. I hope he leaves his wife and they get together that was too cute.

They seem like a cute couple I hope Patrick's wife does find this out

This was a pretty good chapter, but "Your Song" is by Elton John.

This made me feel like I need more rough Patrick smut. That's how I feel.