The Fear of Falling Apart - Comments

@ heatherlight.
Thank you so much! I'll be updating soon!!

Oh my god this is the most adorable fanfiction i have ever read in my life.

Good start so far, keep it up!!

I love your story so far! I've been laughing out loud reading it. You're so funny and sarcastic! I love it. Can't wait to see what happens! :)

you're quite descriptive, I def like that. Patrick is in character, more kudos, and I also like the fact that you've made Patrick have a married relationship to start; it makes things more interesting and mysterious.

lmao I like the fact that he saw her in a boobs lmao patrick's face,I imagine, was quite close to when he saw boobs in the young volcanoes video

love this! update soon!

I really like your story. Took me a while to figure out who the two sister were as their names both begin with a K. Overall, it is really good, and the story seems to be going somewhere at a realistic pace, rather than you dragging the story on :) Can't wait till the next chapter, keep it up :D

Like the story so far! Keep it up!

Well firstly I want to say that I like your title, it actually really really drew me in, and that's not too easy to do. Secondly the lack of a layout is disappointing, it's a tad tedious reading a story without one. But in saying that, I still did enjoy this. I liked the scene with the taxi, she pushed her headfirst into it, for some reason that made me laugh, I have no idea why. Your characters are likable and pretty relatable so kudos on that front. A lot of authors don't really pull that off well, but I think you do. I think you've done well so far, good job!

It's pretty good so far :) keep it up!