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  • Msholli08

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    @ megeddie
    I'm sorry I haven't updated this in a while... I've been going through a lot of person things and it's really affected my time. I really want to update this soon, and I'm going to try to. Thanks for taking the time to read it. I really appreciate it. <3
    March 21st, 2014 at 06:18am
  • megeddie

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    Pwease update I love this :) xx
    January 24th, 2014 at 03:51pm
  • Ali Cat

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    I love this, holy smokes!!! I love that Patrick is surprisingly aggressive and this bad side of him is falling in love with Katie. Love it!
    October 6th, 2013 at 05:56pm
  • TheStaticAge'Stalgia

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    LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
    October 6th, 2013 at 08:42am
  • kb00ty

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    Can't wait for the Alexis drama! Update soon!
    October 1st, 2013 at 10:57pm
  • minorasmith

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    Ahhh great!! and omg Alexis is coming?! Its about to go down!!
    October 1st, 2013 at 10:49pm
  • Msholli08

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    @ marina2351
    Thank you so much for your comment! I can't even express how much it means to me. I've been writing my ass off lately... can't wait to show everything what's coming!
    October 1st, 2013 at 06:50pm
  • Msholli08

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    @ Burn_The_Ashes
    awe I'm so glad! Thank you so much for you comment! <33
    October 1st, 2013 at 06:49pm
  • Burn_The_Ashes

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    Oh wow this story is literally my favourite ever ugh it's amazing.
    October 1st, 2013 at 05:47pm
  • marina2351

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    In love with this.
    October 1st, 2013 at 04:38pm
  • ToxicMayson

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    Aww that was sweet
    October 1st, 2013 at 03:47pm
  • Msholli08

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    @ minorasmith
    Thank you for your honesty! I know there's a lot I still need to work on. (That's why it's says rough draft) lol Thank you for reading! I will be updating this soon and I hope you continue to enjoy it <3
    October 1st, 2013 at 08:04am
  • minorasmith

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    Ahh I reallly like this!! Ill be honest, i wasnt too sure at first, but I LOVE it!!! Keep it up!!
    October 1st, 2013 at 03:41am
  • Msholli08

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    @ AClockworkLove
    Thank you so much for the constructive criticism! I appreciate your feedback. I'm going to work on developing more of the story so it's easier to follow. This is definitely a rough draft on my part so I plan on revising a lot of it in the near future. Again, thank you so much for reading!
    September 30th, 2013 at 03:36am
  • AClockworkLove

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    I really actually enjoy this story. The words and the way you set up your sentences are great! I just feel like the story is rushed, and a lot of the characterization is supposed to come from assumption. Other than that, keep up the good work. :) Looking forward to reading.
    September 29th, 2013 at 09:33am
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    @ ImpracticalJoker13
    oh I'm completely aware that it's by elton john hun. I just love her version for the sake of the scene. :) Thank you for your comment! I'm really glad you liked it. <3
    September 28th, 2013 at 04:08pm
  • kb00ty

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    Loved that she played Elton John. I hope he leaves his wife and they get together that was too cute.
    September 28th, 2013 at 03:20pm
  • ToxicMayson

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    They seem like a cute couple I hope Patrick's wife does find this out
    September 28th, 2013 at 02:51pm
  • ImpracticalJoker13

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    This was a pretty good chapter, but "Your Song" is by Elton John.
    September 28th, 2013 at 02:23pm
  • bobobo

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    This made me feel like I need more rough Patrick smut. That's how I feel.
    September 28th, 2013 at 08:28am
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