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OMG. Marcel (internally fangirls)! I love Marcel.

Anyways... I like your summary. Maybe it's a bit too long and reveals a little too much, but it's quite good, I find, as I go onto the first chapter.

I absolutely love your use of vernacular for the main character in this! I hate, hate reading stories where every single character talks proper twenty-four seven. It's make it feel more real, I guess.

And aaawweee!! The boys relationship is so cute! I absolutely love how you depicted that. (It literally made me go aaweee and smile really big and stupidly.) Murphy (love her name, by the way) and Harry's relationship is cute already. Seriously. I feel bad because I'm gushing now and not really giving a good comment, but I can't help it. They make me gush because already they're cute and they weren't even talking for that long. I think that means good things, especially for the future.

This is a really cute story that is spun on an idea I haven't read before. It's interesting and unique, which makes it refreshing. You a good writer, as well. :)

Overall, this is one of those oh-so cute stories that hook me in and drag me into the depths of too-cute hell (but I like that). You've done a brilliant job with it so far. Good luck!

I absolutely adore your story and I love how original it is (:

Ugh you're so lucky you saw Cher Lloyd. And I want to see Ed, ugh. Have fun though!
And I liked that update!

this is great!

Finally had the time to read the update and I loved it. To quote one of my favourite bands, "you've made your bed so sleep in it" dear Styles. Looking forward to the next one! xx

oh im in love with this! update sooooon

The amount of times that Louis, in real life, purposely calls Niall Neil now.. is just, shakes head. Oh Louis haha.
Omg, is that movie they're watching that ABC Fam movie with Chelsea Kane? I haven't watched it, but I've seen trailers for it haha.
I feel the pain haha. I have to push my glasses up a lot. I wish that I had good vision.
I liked that chapter! (:

I love your story! Seriously, Harry is to cute for words. I can't wait for what will happen next. Hopefully you'll update soon. Can't wait! Xx

aw he's so cute i can't

This is honestly amazing. I absolutely love the idea! I definitely look forward to see how Harry will manage to not blow his cover in the first 10 minutes lol keep up the good stuff! xx

I couldn't stand having a shirt that close to my neck, ever.
Oh man, Harry... what are you getting yourself into haha.
I loved that update!

Omg, I didn't even know that you got an account again. I'm so excited that you're writing again.

Harry in Marcel's get-up is still pretty cute, to be honest haha.
He had big features and I wondered if that applied to the parts of his body I couldn't see. If it did than I certainly wanted to see them.
The guys calling her thick is kind of making me mad. Mostly 'cause I'm plus size too and I'd smack 'em upside the head if they called me that haha.
Their texts to each other are so cute!
I love this so far!

Wow, I love this. Especially with how you incorporated Marcel into it. Most I've read have Harry Styles as a character fighting for the main character, and Marcel as a seperate character fighting Harry for the main. This is much more realistic. :) And I, thoroughly, enjoy it.
Can't wait for your next update.

Ahh this is so cute! It's only on the second chapter and I'm already waiting eagerly for the next one! Post soon!

I alsolutely adore your story already! The romance that is forming between Harry 'Marcel' and Murphy is just simply too cute for words. I hope you update very soon! Xx
PS: This is a VERY original idea!

Literally can't wait to see how the meeting will go!! Update soon :) x

This is so adorable! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I'm really liking it so far.

This is such a great idea! Already love the story. Hurry and update! :)

Love this idea! Can't wait for more, their interaction in real life will probably be great :)

I loooooove this so much! Hope you update again soon!