Second Heartbeat - Comments

Matt has me concerned, he has had me this way all throughout the damn story. Frustrating ass! He better make it up to Mel for making her think he wasn't going to show!

Jimmy is adorable. He always will be and I just wanna smother him in a thousand kisses!

AWESOME CHARACTER ENTRANCE IS AWESOME! oh my gosh. I love it! SPN reference, too. I love you! Oh my god I can't wait for the next chapter!

Also, for someone who's had writers block, it's pretty damn good. I feel like your writing style has improved, too. Just thought I'd let you know. :)

Hmm, I wonder why Matt was so reluctant to go to the bonfire

N'awww, Jimmy is so sweet! I have a feeling that maybe I had the same nightmare as Jimmy, that's why I called him? Or, I had a feeling that JImmy wasn't feeling too good? I don't know, but I can't wait to find out more!

Poor Johnny, again I'm sure Mayra and Ashley are just friends, but the guy does need to catch a break, haha.

Awwww, Zack finally got his chance to ask Jess out on a date! :D Can't wait to see what happens on their date!

Poor Johnny! He was probably thinking that Ashley was going to be a girl, but he thought wrong XD

Yes, Brian, you should be sorry! Next time, I'll kick your ass!

Looking forward to more! :D

Okay, so I'm thinking that is definitely how Pheobe died. But how would I be having those nightmares? I'm trying to work out how it's all linked, but I'm stumped, haha.

And why was Jess so cautious about us getting closer? Hmm. So many questions! Haha. Can't wait to read more :D

I'm thinking that water had something to do with Pheobe's demise for Jimmy to react like that? Although, Brian should know better. I know he didn't know that I have a phobia of water, but still, going around pushing people in, kids do that. Naughty Brian! And, myself having a big phobia of open water, it's scary as hell when someone pushes you in, panic attacks the lot!

Good chapter, looking forward to more :D

Jimmy is my knight in shining armour yet again :D

Fuck those douches who pushed me in the water, I'm assuming someone pushed me anyway haha. If she's anything like me, she would be nowhere near the water. Ew no thanks.

I wonder what happened to me/Pheobe before though to make him react like that. I'm intrigued!

More soon please :D

Oooh the plot- like Raj's gravy- thickens! Sorry TBBT quote there. ANYWAYS, I wonder who did that to Rachel- and what they did to her for a matter of fact! I wanna see more of me and Brian but you know...I'm a little biased there...more soon please!

Hahaha, awwww poor Johnny! He's so adorable! Suave Johnny, really suave. I wonder why she had to rush out though? Come here gnomeo, mamma's got a hug for you! :D

What's the significance of the bike then? Looking forward to more! :D

Great update! I'm sorry but I laughed when Johnny fell down in front of her, I could just see it happening and it's fucking hilarious! I'm glad he found his girl but he's getting way to discouraged. He should totally call her and met up with her again, who knows what might happen when they see each other again. I mean, who can resist the gnome, he's so cute! haha. Update soon, I want to know what happens next.

I'm all caught up now, good thing you mentioned it otherwise I would have forgotten again haha. Eeep, I'm sat on Jimmy's lap may or may not be fan girling a little at that XD

Awww, poor Johnny! Everyone seems to have found their girl bar him. Ooo or maybe he has found his girl? I do hope so!

I can't wait to see how it all develops and whether or not the boys will get some answers. More soon! :D

Well, it seems all the guys have seen their girlfriend/wife look a likes except for poor Johnny. I feel bad for the little gnome. It seems they're all getting along well which is good. Ooooo who is this mysterious woman with the beautiful voice? Could it be Maria or is it someone else? You need to update this now! I still have so many unanswered questions. I really like the plot of this. Great job so far :D

Mel is pretty paranoid lol. Aww I kind of feel bad for Jess, if I were in her situation and if it were Matt instead of Zacky and he didn't notice me I would be sad too. Well, it's time to meet the guys. I wonder how this will go.

So, they have been turned. That's one question answered but now I have another, how did they get turned? You're driving me crazy with all these questions woman but I love it!

First Jimmy, and now Brian. It seems they are starting to see a connection too. I wonder how it will go when they go to the show.

Mmmm cake! I want cake! Gimme cake! lol.

Another great chapter :D

Alright so I have read the first two chapters so far and I like this. I was kind of confused when I read the first chapter. So the guys lost their wives because they were accused of being witches and now they are all having nightmares about for some strange reason and these girls are having nightmares as well. I'm wondering if these girls are their wives reincarnated in a different body or like Ailurophile said, maybe dopplegangers because they are obviously connected somehow. Apparently the guys are vampires since I read the comments, I wonder how that happened. Were they always vampires or were they turned? All these questions, I hope I get my answers soon as I continue on since I'm subscribing to this.

I really liked chapter two as well. That old guy is creepy, I mean seriously, what's his deal? He was obviously scared and upset for some reason but for what? You know you should never hit or push a lady, that is just terrible. I'm glad Jimmy came to the rescue and put him in his place. So, Rachel and Jimmy huh? It looks like the drama is already beginning.

Great first two chapters. I'm going to go read the rest and return shortly.

Oooh serious drama! I wonder if the guys will ever work it out. Update soon please!

This is great! It's well written and I like how you leave the reader with new questions after each chapter, the flow is awesome and I love the layout!

I'm definitely subscribing to this story. It's two of my favorite things: vampires and the Avenged Sevenfold guys. I'm really itnerested in what's going to happen next. Are the girls some kind of doppelganger (however you spell it lol)? Did all of them have their wives killed the same way?

Anywho...yay Jimmy to the rescue!

So, you got a sub and a reccomendation from me.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

@ RachTheBat
Yes the guys are vampires ;) You'll find out the connection eventually.

@ Zacky Vengeance;
Haha yes I had to throw the bakery thing in there because I could and there will probably be more badass Jimmy moments to come. I'll have more up soon

@ Synful Cocktail
I'm working on the next chapter right now! It should be up hopefully in the next few days or so