Second Heartbeat - Comments

OOooooohhhhhhhhh witches huh? NICE.
I fucking love this! Brian's so nervous. Holy hell, I'd love to see what happens next!

Ahh, so they're vampires huh? I like it :D

I wonder why us girls, the ones who look like their dead wives (not creepy at all..haha) show up now, hmm

I like the girls' playful relationship, that part made me laugh, same with Brian stuttering over his words haha.

I want to know the connection between the girls and the boys, it's bugging me haha

Can't wait to see what happens when they join them back stage, more soon! :D

Yay, we get free cake now! XD Yeah, ass hat! Lay off the grabby grabby hands huh? Men haha

JIMMY TO THE RESCUE :D Take that you son of a bitch, oh my, Jimmy is so hunky, protecting us ladies from the sleaze ball

He thinks he knows me eh...? Could be that I've been running through your dreams huh James haha

More soon :D

Ahashahaha I work at a bakery- that is so cool! Anyway, I loved Jimmy in this chapter, so manly! I love how he was just like 'GET YOUR HANDS OFF OF THAT LADY, PUNK ASS BITCH'. Does he know her? Ooooh crazy shit's going down! More soon please :)

I always squeal when I see my name in a story, I'm so lame! Haha. I'm liking it so far, intrigued as to why they are all having similar dreams and what it is that connects them all together, something is afoot! Witches...? Me likey! :D

I'm getting a good vibe from this first chapter, looking forward to more!

Hehehe, there's my name! Anyways, this sounds amazing so far- I am super interested! I wanna know what happens next- why are they all getting the nightmares? More soon please!