People and Places Unknown - Comments

@ go.effin.nuts
This one's on hold while I figure out where to take it, sorry!

Update? Please? I need to know what happens D:

Haha okay, do it do it! :)

@ polka dot perfection
Hmm... that's an interesting idea. Tripping into each other and bashing mouths sounds painful, though. Maybe some other kind of accidental intimacy? They are about to share a bed with one another.

@ luck_dragon
what about an accidental kiss? To get Daniel thinking of Harper that way, like they trip into one another or have to fake it to not look suspiscious or something? maybe?

@ polka dot perfection
Sex may take a while longer to achieve, but I promise it is inevitable. Any other ideas?

lol it was worth a try haha:P :D

@ polka dot perfection
They aren't old enough to drink! Daniel's only sixteen. De-virgining someone while they're drunk is kinda morally shady, too, especially since Harper is supposed to be taking care of him. On the one hand good drama, but I'm not sure Harper's irresponsible enough to do that.

Daniel and Harper should hook up! like they all go drinking and when they come back, they just kinda do it, becuase Daniel's never drunk before? idk and lol I know it's so fast but it would be a good lead into relationship parts when you can't think up storyline perse for the moment?

@ polka dot perfection
Not yet! I'm having problems focussing on writing anything right now. Also I don't exactly know what should happen next... I have a general direction, but I haven't really worked out the full order of events yet. Feel free to make some suggestions!

HAVE THE STARS ALIGNED CORRECTLY YET!?!?!?!

@ stunning.reality;
When the stars align correctly.

When will this continue? O:

@ stunning.reality;
Haha sooooon.

I NEED MORE.

MOORRRREEEEEE.

@ A S K I N G . Ladies love cats! You just have to put yourself out there, Spooks, and you will get all of the ladies. All of them.

I wouldn't mind help with the layout thing, I'm just concerned that doing anything much to it would make it more difficult to read. I like the window being wide and the black on white for the text. I wouldn't mind a header or a different thing for the background part if they were unobtrusive, though.

I'd want to pet Spooks in a car ride xD in a completely appropriate non-awkward way of course! He's charm for the ladies really works even though he's fictional. I give you props for that.

And that creepy vampire, I'd totally be a nervous intrigued mess. I really like how you characters are, I don't know how to explain it exactly yet but when I do I'll be sure to let you know.

Very curious about Sanctum and still worried about why they would take Orion. D:

Oh yes the layout maker definitely can be a bit weird to work with. It took me a while to get use to it. If you don't mind and are interested I'd be willing and happy to try to come up with a layout.

Keep working you magical and awesome writing skills! <3

I'd want to pet Spooks in a car ride xD in a completely appropriate non-awkward way of course! He's charm for the ladies really works even though he's fictional. I give you props for that.

And that creepy vampire, I'd totally be a nervous intrigued mess. I really like how you characters are, I don't know how to explain it exactly yet but when I do I'll be sure to let you know.

Very curious about Sanctum and still worried about why they would take Orion. D:

Oh yes the layout maker definitely can be a bit weird to work with. It took me a while to get use to it. If you don't mind and are interested I'd be willing and happy to try to come up with a layout.

Keep working you magical and awesome writing skills! <3

@ luck_dragon
haha

@ fiction246
Poor Daniel, such vampire bait.