People and Places Unknown - Comments

Ooo a vampire!!! Really hope Orion is going to be okay!!!! Looking forward to more :)

@ luck_dragon
haha definitely have that skill down pat

@ fiction246
I'm glad you can control your laughter well enough not to make a scene!

"You wear a necklace with your dad's jizz in it around your neck?" If I wasn't in a lecture I would have laughed so much!!!! I love it :) looking forward to more :)

Thank you! Glad you like Spooks :)

I looked at the layout page but wasn't really sure what to do with it.

I really like this, your pulling off the super natural character really well and the details/realism of their actions is fantastic. I can't wait to see what happens.

I'm worried as to why they took Daniel's father and Spooks seems like an interesting person xD

I'm just curious, why no cool awesome layout?

@ fiction246
:D

Hope Orion is going to be okay!!! Looking forward to seeing what happens next!!

@ luck_dragon
you're welcome :) they definitely invoke those responses and emotions.

@ fiction246
Thanks, I'm glad you like it! I need my sheltered, innocent characters for maximum hurt/comfort factor.

Just read the first two chapters and I absolutely love it!! It's a very interesting plot and I love the way you write sheltered, innocent type characters :) looking forward to more!!!

@ CptLollipop
Thank you, glad you like it!

You're such a great writer! C:
Love the new story

You're such a great writer! C:
Love the new story

@ Miss_Twitch_Luca
Thanks! Haha, hopefully they will be answered soon! First chapter is mostly to build intrigue.

I have so many questions just by this chapter that I hope will be answered. If not I will but you and bug you and bug you until I get them. Love the new story sweetie! :)